Hmm... A bleaker take on the relationship than most - but I like it - for what I assume are obvious reasons.

Heh. I liked this story. I REALLY liked it, romantic.

It was funny the bar scene

Maybe describe it more...

sad but yet so beautiful.

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D.

Aw...Poor Nanao. Kyouraku better treat her right. *nods decisively*

Very beautiful. And a complete departure from the usual happy, merry drinking you see in anime or read in fan fiction.

Original and touching. A favourite.

Whoa. That was heavy. Beautiful, but heavy.

Keep Writing!

~May

aw! yihii! suh-weet... cute.. i love nanaokyouroku pairings! its meant to be... sniffle...
she brings out the seriousness in him and he brings out the fun in her...

reminds me of something i don wanna remember but who cares?

this pairing rocks!!


SEPTEMBER ♥ DECEMBER

Nicely done - I like how this made Nanao seem very real... her internal battle with insecurities and even anger felt quite true to her. Very touching, indeed :)

wow...very realistic and tender...
I felt that this is something that might really happen to them...

Oohh.

*shivers* Not as..romantic as I first thought. How you conveyed this story was very...real.

(IMO, that flashback was kind of a drag. Not that it wasn't written superbly, but all flashbacks make people - or maybe just me - bored, I guess >.

Then the scar has to scab back over again...

It makes sense that Nanao is hiding things like that. I'm personally terrified of getting into a situation while under the influence. That's why I've only drunk in the company of trusted people, and that happens few and far between.

That and I can't hold my own alcohol... heh.

Great story!

oh...poor nanao. really good!

beautifully written!

I really like this piece. It's kind of dark, but not too much-- more "true to life" than anything. May we have a sequel? Please?

Poor Nanao. At least she has a champion now.