nice i like it

Nice story. I like it from both POV's though I'd have to say that I don't think Voldy needs a reason to kill anyone, and I don't really understood Snape's part in all of this, but that doesn't really bother me. Anyway great fic.

I love it. It is a great story.

very well done

Really original and interesting story. Love it.

bloody brilliant

wow. i can't say any more that.

You really did capture Voldemort quite well. One request: Would you write another POV of Voldemort but with him being more manipulative?

Please don't leave! Your writing style is one of my favorites. You bring life to your stories that is rarely seen any more in the fan-fiction world. I miss your other works that have already been deleted. They were amazing. Don't give up on your writing just because some agents says that it is not good enough. I have a friend that is in the same boat, but she submits her work every where and has managed to get a few small pieces published even when other say what she writes is horrible. Please Please don't give up and leave. It would definitely be a great loss to the free literary world that is favorably called . You would/will be greatly missed and I definitely hope for a swift and spectacular return.

That was awesome! Great Job! :)

Voldemort is an oddly touching bastard. *tear*

I'm so touched.

Hmm... when writing a different POV that follows exactly the same story line, do try to actually make something different. Especially towards the end; it just felt as if you'd copied and pasted the entire story and had only changed the wording around a little.

Instead of writing exactly the same thing twice, why not instead write only the bits where Voldemort's perspective is actually interesting and most importantly adds something new to the story?

Anyway, aside from this point - and quite a few errors which makes me fear the consequences of someone taking spell check away from you - it was an excellent story. You've managed to capture some tension and suspense which is a rare thing in fanfiction, let's be honest.

-Brackets

I've already read and reviewed both of these, but I stumbled upon them again and find them just as amazing the second time. I almost like Voldemort's better; it was a perfect portrayal of him. It makes him seem ALMOST human, but with the cruel side in him that makes him the Dark Lord. I loved seeing the story from both sides. Fantastic job.

Brilliant