Hmmm. No, it's not bad. I do think it could be tightened up more- "she the victim of their merciless burglaries"- ai! But I like the next-to-last line, and the whole metaphor. I'm envisioning Queen-Anne's-lace. Which may or may not be appropriate. I'm also rambling. *hushes*

Original! Well-done.

that was not bad! That was great!

Okay after looking up almost all the words in this poem ;;; and looking up the long words in their defenetions, I gotta say... I'm impressed. Good job Blue.. but now I suck. ::thinks about what he is going to do once he reads this:: I don't suck! Umm... Yeah! Great writing Blue. Love ya, Sabrina