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Reviews For: Trembling in the Trials

FFXNathalie
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuse*giggle*
Did you forget this story? ^^
Anyway,mabye you should go on with writing this story.
I think it´s very good so far,so I don´t understand why you stopped it ^^

Please think of this

Nathalie
High Summoner Yuna
2007-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abusetelcontarian,

I personally think that Rikku will drive Auron crazy first (IF they drive eachother crazy at ALL). You are VERY descriptive. Especailly when you talk about thier eyes. Eyes are very important. Anyway, I LOVE it! And who and WHY were they screaming if Lulu didn't do anything. Plz keep it going.

Best Regards
High Summoner Yuna
PixieYunie
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI loved it, it was so funny and so cute. It almost made me drool. I had to stop myself, because it makes such a mess. What I trying to say was, I love it and please update soon

Love, PixieYunie
BlackRainWillFall
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseYou. Update. NOW! Please! I'm dying for the next chapter!
losttoxichope
2007-06-18
ch 1,
abuseOh I'm excited that you're giving us - or me a new story to read! Yay! I can't wait for the second part. But I wonder who is betting on who. Oh I do hope you update soon. But I'll be patient and wait for how ever long you want to make me wait haha.
Albino Bebop
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseThat's the Tari I know! It's good to see you're still writing. ^^
Fwe
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseI really liked that. As a matter of fact, I was disappointed when I got to the end - not because it was bad, but because I still wanted to read more. Part Two, eh? Can't wait. ;)

Good job. Nice characterization.

~Fwe
phedre87
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuseGood chapter-I can't wait till the second part! Update soon! :)
Viva La Kitty
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuseO~ This is good! I could picture Tidus doing something like that. He might be all high and mighty in the video game, but we know he's up to no good. XD

Anyways, Looking forward to this conclusion of yours!

(And I still think my title was better!)

Blessed be,
The Kat
Violet
2007-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm very much liking the sound of this prospect!! Well described picture. I know it's rated k but any chance of a bit of Auron lemon? I eagerly await part 2!!
forensicgirl21
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI liked this, can't wait to read the next part of it.
Drachegirl14
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I'm so glad you're writing, lol. I thought you were gone forever!

lol, this was good. Not long, but good. Hope for part two soon . . . with lemony goodness of course, lol.

And hey, if you need help with my challenge, I'd be more then willing to talk.

Hope to see more out of you soon!
PetiteCookie
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseYay! You posted, and pray tell why aren't you on msn?

Ach well, can't complain if you got this posted!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

ImInDenial~X~

P.S. India's doing great!
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