this is a fairly epic storyline and i like how you changed that whole escape from the zig thing to something involving (i'm guessing) your 2 main characters i like the grinning banshee she reminds me of one of my friends. . . is that a bad thing? probably anyway i ramble your a good writer and i cant wait to see more

I have I seen you on CoH? I thought I had...O well. Nice short, grizzly detailing as usual.