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| FriendoftheVampires892 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI normally dun like stuff like this, but this made me want to cry... You should seriously turn this to a chapter fic... I love it... aw... |
| Jolly 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseNYAHH! It was adorable and sad. I loved it... You should make one for the other dads and children of team ten... ESPECIALLY CHOUZA and CHOUJI! IT WAS AWESOME! I'D GIVE IT FIVE/FIVE! =D YOU'RE THE SEX XD |
| ShikaLover365 2007-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse*luvs* I love this story... Continue the good work! |
| gare de lyon 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseaw that was sad :( still, good story |
| Kazekirei 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWow...I really like the prose. The only thing I suggest is to cut down a bit on the (...) though I'm guilty of the same thing. Anyways, great story! (P.S. I love 'Teardrop'! I didn't think many other people listened to Massive Attack.) |