Loved this story, especially the subtle paraphrase of Psalm 27 along with the expression of the characters' inner thoughts and emotions, which were revealing and sentimental without being sappy. Very insightfully romantic, given that this was written when only four of the seven HP novels had been published. Nice work!

just to let you know the links are not there good story i liked it :)

Aw, this is really cute. Good job!

Loved it!

A lovly moment and well written out!

Luv it!

beautiful! good job!

i wanted to read the earliest hg/ss fic i could find and ruddy ewl im glad i did that was so luveli, aww bless i feel all soppy and am having urges to go and bee all musy with my boyf...hahahaha maybe not lol :)

Also reccing this. This was the first Snape/Hermione pieces I ever read. It's very beautiful.

*breathes out* So powerful. One of my many favorite lines is: In the darkness, she has become my light and my salvation. I wonder if she even knows how she saves me…saves me from myself.

I feel like a review can't do this justice. You have such an innate ability to reach into their minds and pluck out their innermost fears and emotions and thoughts. You're amazing. And so is this story.

Beautiful, beautiful story. Just the kind of story a Snape fangirl loves. :) Wonderful job.

YAY

This was a really wonderful story! I loved the drawing this was based on as well! Excellent work! _

Blessed be and Luv,

**The Dark Insomniac**

"In a fleshy tomb, I am buried above ground."

"Dead men tell no tales unless it's in Forensics."

"My Karma ran over your Dogma."

I went to check out those pictures and that particular picture does seem to provoke a story of some sort. Love it, like always.

very romantic