| Reviews for Dirty Little Secrets |
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BlueCowl54 3/17/13 . chapter 9Drakken and Camille |
Screwtape 10/13/12 . chapter 10 Reading this makes me wonder... Was the goal of this series an attempt to show how cheating can be harmless, or in some way beneficial? Or are you just setting up a house of cards here, kept intact by the character's (flimsy) selfish justifications for their bad behavior? I mean, just one of the affairs coming to light between Shego/Kim/Ron/Yori/Betty/Anne/Vivian/James and BOOOM! You could write a novel on the fallout. |
ArchAngel-Wolf 8/29/12 . chapter 10:O Wow. This one was really good just the pairings were like "wow" My jaw was on the floor right after the second chapter and it stayed there till I finished it. haha :D |
THEcoolestmastr 11/25/11 . chapter 10HOLY SHIT EVERYONE IS A FUCKING CHEATER I LIKE IT |
ShadowCub 7/21/09 . chapter 10Depressing in a crazy way. |
Kay8abc 5/11/09 . chapter 10I like this collection. especially the first three chapters. I thinks it's funny Kim, Shego, Ron, and Yori all end up on the mountain. Love the story. -kate |
ErnestTheGuy 9/7/08 . chapter 10you had some strange pairings in this one. Will Du and AdreanaLynn, Ann and Betty, James and Vivian, and Tara and Wally. i didnt realize that you were talking about the prince until you mention he was a crown price. i still cant believe you put Barkin and Dash together. i mean what were you thinking. i creeped me out soo bad when i read that. and what's with all the cheating going on with everyone? Dont get me wrong, i like the sex, Ernest. |
Nidoking16 6/25/08 . chapter 10This was very interesting. Definite kudos on the inner workings of a lot of these characters, you've really made them seem human, what with the flaws and all. P Sometimes it sounds like you're trying a little too hard to clarify that some characters aren't looking to cheat, but it's nothing major or distracting. Anyway, you've given a lot of great reason for each of these characters to be together, and I enjoyed reading it. Some chapters seemed a bit more likely than others, but overall, great job. :D I can really see how things like this can and do happen. Great read, I enjoyed myself. ] |
Ryukashy 5/10/08 . chapter 10Interesting works and interesting pairs. For me the better are, obviously, KimShego and RonYori, but I've find some very interesting stuff also in the others pairs. The JustineBrick is very well written, because the whole story communicates the oddity and, for me, the wrong feeling of their relationship (it's the only one where lacks at least faith between the two characters). I've liked very much also the MoniqueFelix story. It's a little sad, but I think it's possible to find some kind of sweetness in this. I think it's a story that deserve some developing, dont you? ;-) Concluding, a very good work. Maybe a little sad under some aspects, but still a very good work. Like always. :-) |
CastaS 9/18/07 . chapter 10i enjoyed the one-shots, great ones. |
franzferdinandfan03 9/9/07 . chapter 10 i read the whole story and i thought it was pretty good. are you gonna make like a continuation of this or anything? i hope so... i like your kigo focused fics the best but this was good 2. thx and write more plz. |
charis-chan 8/30/07 . chapter 10thank you so mucho for this story. Is amazing, as all your stories... I wish I could write like this... oh, man, well at least I can read yours... keep writting, you're just great! |
my gaurdian HaruHara 8/27/07 . chapter 10manSL agin with the throwing me a curve that was great fun though |
jiggermole 8/24/07 . chapter 10tara sweet, but wally? that was a bit out of left field. Anyway it was still a good read. Thanks again. |
Sora-Hikari 8/22/07 . chapter 10*Is hit with last pairing from behind* Wally? Huh where'd that come from. The sweet small town girl brings a new man out of the prince's shell :D Aw its done, but with such a sweet ending. Not much of a 'dirty' secret but that's good. So no more chapters (or follow-ups) but it was a great read. My favourites would be the Kigo and...the Bonnie/Larry, but thats because I really liked your Bonnie. |