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| Merveilleux24 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseMeh. Too abstract. Nice sentence structure. |
| Charmaine Blandings 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseI have to say it's not one of the best poems I've ever read, but it's okay. |