Good story so far. A little creepy, but good. I'll have to read the rest when I can.

For some reason this chapter lacks quotation marks. Making it really hard to tell when somebody is saying something or just thinking something. I don't know if it's your computer doing that or what, but it's very sidetracking.

But anyways, this is a nice story you've got here. And I'm glad you're back, it really annoys me when I find good stories without an ending. I hope you plan to continue it.

I think Rick is just having some sort of off-the-wall dream and wants to wake ASAP. I'm no that much into Pokemon anymore but I'm likin' your fic so far. Hope he doesn't starve.

Just read chapter 1, Rick. Good stuff. I about ** myself when the girl couldn't cook either!

Just read your first chapter Rick. Good start! I can't wait to read more, even though I'm not really into Pokemon.

For anyone reading this, go read Rick's Sniper's Last Stand fanfic, it's awesome!

Mothers I swear. It was funny and I'm already making assumptions. The Legal Gibberish sounds like it came from the back of a box.

I really like this so far, only on part 2 though

I read chapter one.

I read the intro :3

mrawh this doesn't sound half bad.

This chappie was good, I liked it. Most shows and stories and the like usually have the spotlight on the guy. Seeing that you are obviously a guy, I was glad that you gave Rose attention, a lot of people dont do that, but focus mainly on the main charecter-the dude. Thankies from a attention craving girl!

The only thing I spotted in this chappie is that I did not immiadiatley recognize Koga as the old man. It could be that I am absolutely lazy and skipped parts, or that I am incredibly dimwitted. Probably both. x.x

RapidSong123

I like it. You are some writer.

A very enjoyable read. I particularly like your battle scenes, a good balance of description and action. Actually, that applies to the fic as a whole. Very well balanced.

MOAR PLOX!

Haha! Im glad to have someone who agrees with me that you dont have to have everything exactly right! ^^

I think this is the last chappie that I have read up to on other sites. I cant wait for the next chapter! Im so excited! x.x

I know it is kinda off topic, but have you abandoned Fight for Freedom??

i can't wait for the next update! hope you have a good time in Spain.

You are an awesome writer. Nothing blunt, all smooth. I like your style. Please continue!