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| Lonepichu 2007-12-14 ch 2, | abuseI read chapter one. |
| Lonepichu 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI read the intro :3 mrawh this doesn't sound half bad. |
| RapidSong123 2007-07-23 ch 7, | abuseThis chappie was good, I liked it. Most shows and stories and the like usually have the spotlight on the guy. Seeing that you are obviously a guy, I was glad that you gave Rose attention, a lot of people dont do that, but focus mainly on the main charecter-the dude. Thankies from a attention craving girl! The only thing I spotted in this chappie is that I did not immiadiatley recognize Koga as the old man. It could be that I am absolutely lazy and skipped parts, or that I am incredibly dimwitted. Probably both. x.x RapidSong123 |
| amoreanfibio 2007-07-15 ch 7, | abuseI like it. You are some writer. |
| Gya 2007-07-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseA very enjoyable read. I particularly like your battle scenes, a good balance of description and action. Actually, that applies to the fic as a whole. Very well balanced. MOAR PLOX! |
| RapidSong123 2007-07-14 ch 6, | abuseHaha! Im glad to have someone who agrees with me that you dont have to have everything exactly right! ^^ I think this is the last chappie that I have read up to on other sites. I cant wait for the next chapter! Im so excited! x.x I know it is kinda off topic, but have you abandoned Fight for Freedom?? |
| theredone1223 2007-07-10 ch 6, | abusei can't wait for the next update! hope you have a good time in Spain. |
| amoreanfibio 2007-06-26 ch 4, | abuseYou are an awesome writer. Nothing blunt, all smooth. I like your style. Please continue! |
| RapidSong123 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHeh, sorry I forgot to add in something: we think alike! I have a story that I like, JUST put up, and it is really REALLY similar to this one. Its called Enter: Me. Here is the link if you will please take a bit of your time to read it; itsnot long at all. |
| RapidSong 2007-06-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseIm back! We spoke, or emailed, WAY Way back, earlier this year. You do remember, right? Its okay if you dont, just asking. All ramblings aside, lets get to the good part. It was awesome! Of course, that is normal for you, being the extreme writer extrodinaire! Haha, it was really good. The only thing I noticed is that- now Im going by memory here, so please dont kill me if I get it wrong- dont you go north instead of south? Im not sure, and Im a mite to lazy to check...okay Im really lazy, but that is OK! ~RapidSong |
| theredone1223 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abusekeep up the good work, i want to see what Pokémon Rick uses. and don't worry i'm working on my own Pokémon fanfic (which isn't up yet), but would it be a crossover if part of the story takes place in our world? |