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| Marz1 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abusevery good story. are you going to explain when the spandex comes into this? |
| SacredStoneFury 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuselol. Another great fic. It fits Gai so well! I was laughing almost the entire way through. I can't wait to read the rest of your fics. (despite how slow I read...) |
| ChibiEd 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI read this story and you have Gai's character hands down. I like how his mother has those "gentle reprimands" that shows a future connection between him and Lee with punishing him. Then with his ojiisan wanting to talk forever, now who does that remind you of? Hm, Gai? Haha. When you had the interactions between Kakashi and his team and Gai I thought they were set perfectly with a little yondaime-sensei as well. Kakashi's all "but sensei it's 13-13." *twitch* and running away at the end made my day. You're right, there should be more Gai-related stories out there. Definitely one of the best Kakashi and Gai friendship one-shots I've read though. |
| Everybody's Neesan 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! So funny, and so Gai! |
| Gabwr 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was hilarious to read. You really did a god job writing Gai and Kakashi's weird friendship. |
| MagicallyInclined 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI love Gai! Seriously, he's one of my favorite characters (at the very least top 10). It's kind of weird to read about him without Rock Lee though... |
| waiting4morning 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWhen a friend told me about a "good story featuring Gai-sensei" I didn't believe her, but you've proved me wrong! He strikes me as a difficult character to get right, but you've done a very good job. I loved the last bit with Kakashi. Thanks for writing! |
| singeivoire 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseYour Gai is pitch-perfect! I giggled all the way through this one. Thanks for making my afternoon a bit brighter! |
| wednesday1990 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusehahaha...this is great! I was thinking of putting a younger gai in my time travel fic and your story gave me a great idea. (Although no one'll see it for a while because of my damn computer :( ...) Anyway, Ja ne! |
| WWSmith 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseAh... the rivalary of youth begins! *nice guy pose* Great story! - WWS |
| James Hiwatari 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuse\o\ I agree with you, there is no enough Gai in fafictions, and I still wonder why... o.o' Wow, so col the youthfull Great Beast revived in that sparkling one-shot of youthness! Gai is cool as well! o.o'' Ah... yeah... *Attention to might-be silly question:* Is Gai yonger than Kakashi? *Silly question done, feel free to ignore it...* O.O James Hiwatari |
| Gosling 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuse... Gai is so cool. Yosh! Hehe, I like your story, it puts a new light on everything, and makes the characters more realistic. I love it! Cheers, Kirsten |
| Rocke and Roll 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was marvellous. I love the relationship between Kakashi and Gai, and your characterisation was absolutely spot on. This piece was a treat. Thank you. |
| The Elven-Spear 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGai: YOSH! Your youthful flames of youthfulness burn brightly with youthful passion that fuels your youthful flames of youthfulness! Tenten: What Gai sensei means is that you write good. Lee: YOSH! YOUR FLAMES OF YOUTHFULNESS BURN BRIGHTLY ENOUGH TO RIVAL MINE! Neji: What Lee means is what Gai means... The Bakas... |
| Azamiko 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseYay Gai & Kakashi friendship! |