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| BellaCullenVampirz 2008-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseso sad.. I LOVE IT! BRILLIANT!! LOL |
| Allegra.Jane.Alec 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThe last sentence was so beautiful and sad! *Sobs* |
| twilight-is-lovee 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseaweh man, that made me wanna cry!! i cried my eyes out when edward left. but then again, who didn't? |
| xo-annaelizabeth-xo 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseaw bela sadnes |
| la saboteuse 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI-i-it's so-o-o s-a-a-d! (sobs!) Loved it, though. I've never read anything like that before, and it was very well written. C'est magnifique et tres triste, mais super! |
| Moonpetal Lily 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWow...you did a good job with this deep stuff. I like how you conveyed Alice's pain (who we rarely think about during the breakup), and showed the side of her that knows devotion. |
| GoldenEcho7287 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was brilliant! That last paragraph was so sad, I'm tearing up. |
| i.heart.twilightxx 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abusewow... this is good :D |
| OfficiallyDazzled 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my Carlilse. -sniffles- That was so sad! Really good, though! :) |
| Lost in Believing 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, this one-shot was really really good. It gives you a whole new perspective for that scene. Great job! I love it. |
| awfullynormal 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. Soo sad... Very well-written though, and you really got Alice's personality down. And Edward's, too, even through the phone. Great job. loved it. |
| sohmakid 2008-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw... |
| FallenMystery 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThank you ten billion times over. I love the way you right emotions--they're so acute and so accurate. ... and I know that my reviews are getting lamer and lamer. FM |
| Mrs. Knightley 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful!! You did a great job keeping everyone true to their character!! I think that is very much what would have happened. Thanks for being will to write post and share your work! Mrs. Knightley |
| Tassel630 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI don't think Edward sounds... agonized... enough. And I doubt he would have wanted to talk to anyone after that. Alice, though, was captured very well. /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\ -The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630 -Please don't respond to this review- |