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| Katie B 17 2008-03-04 ch 2, | abuseAir, =) i love it this story is unfolding nicely! =) (sry 4 my spelling) |
| Kawazoe Emiko 2007-07-10 ch 2, | abuseI wish Sen could be a River spirit, like Haku, or a Fire spirit, it stands out her personality |
| Kawazoe Emiko 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, can't imagine Lin yelling to Haku, like a noisy mother yelling to her son |
| Daisy Queen 2007-06-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseawsome story hurry up post |
| Rei Taisho 2007-06-15 ch 2, | abuseHey awesome story oh and fire will u do ur 1st reviewer a favor and make it where if she is a fire spirit if she says "when u play with fire u get burned." |