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| fallenbloodykillerangel 2008-02-07 ch 3,  | abuseHear, hear! I've got you a review typed! As I exclaimed I'm not a review person, but you begged me so nicely *glares in your general direction* Mistakes? No. Other language mistake? Uhm I don't even know if you use one -_-; Plot? I like the sound of it! The idea of the uhm half-alien/human thingy (Xhi?)? Grr, why didn't I come up with that! Now I shall beg you nicely. Please update! *pokes you in secret* Ah revence is so sweet *laughs crazely* This one took me very long *sighs tiredly* I hope you're happy with it? |
| Vampirika 2007-11-24 ch 3, | abuseWow this story is awesome. I can't wait for the next chapt! |
| Ange De Mort La Pomme De Sa... 2007-08-22 ch 3, | abuseI think I like the young Predator, tiny yet fierce. Good job Sonsasu. |
| RocknKitty 2007-08-07 ch 3, | abusemust...read...more...soon...or...head...will...explode! great story! you always have great stories to read ^_^ keep the chapies comin'! |
| The Oracle Dragon 2007-08-02 ch 3, | abuseoh come on! don't leave us hanging! Good story!! |
| The Oracle Dragon 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseFast food! lol good story! |
| The Oracle Dragon 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abusehah hahahaa a a h a hahah! Where do you think your going Ooman? that was funny! |
| Opera-Gypsy 2007-07-18 ch 3, | abuseGreat update! Is he the 'runt' she remembers? Those flashbacks with the little pred were very cute. XD Good work! Ciao |
| The Ginger Ninja 2007-07-18 ch 3, | abuseWe you updated! Yaay! Good chappy (^^) Now get goin on the next one! teeheehee Ginger Ninja x x |
| StormRaven333 2007-07-18 ch 3, | abuseI thought it was ok. Alot of flash backs and all but still...they all add to a more complete picture, ne? ^^ Hope to see another update soon! ~Storm |
| StormRaven333 2007-06-29 ch 2, | abuseBrilliant stuff *nodz* please... UPDATE! ~Storm |
| StormRaven333 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseOoh...this is looking exciting already *claps* onto the next...^.^ ~Storm |
| Trickster91 2007-06-26 ch 2, | abuseI like this story so far. How about Leo for his name? It's simple, yet to the point. |
| Ange De Mort La Pomme De Sa... 2007-06-26 ch 2, | abuseI like, keep up the good work. |
| Cittygurl 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseomg! that was amazing! i was laughing when she fell off the bed! ouch! that's goot to hurt! i love it! update! please |