Ye gods that was beautiful. Just heart-wrenching (no pun intended). It probably could have benefited from a beta, because you've got a couple of minor grammatical errors in there, but that's a minor quibble with an otherwise wonderful fic.

Good work.

That was really powerful, and I'm not even an Eternal Darkness fan. My friend played it, though, and she was the one who directed me to this. Very pretty piece, actually. You voiced her longing really nicely. I like how it ended, too. It was like... closure for the story, and maybe, in a way, closure for Ellia, too.

Beautiful job! :D

A very well-written piece. The final line was a good way to end it.