I'm very impressed with this 1st chapter. I really liked how you kept Sora and Urd in character.

Damn good fic, thanks for posting. I always had the impression that Urd could turn anyone lesbian, even the mousy Sora.

ah, excellent!

I, personally, love the pairing. I never thought of an Urd/Sora fic, but damn, if anyone could make one, you can! This is interesting in plot and I can't wait to read more! Good luck and update soon! ^^

~-Zaya_Ayame-~

Well, well, soldier...

This is a certainly interesting piece of work, I'll give you that.
Also, I never thought about the Urd/Sora pairing! That's damn original, son. Very original, indeed.

Now, as for the fic...Nice! XD Damn, that scene at poor Sora's place was damn HAWT! Indeed, so many things Urd can teach'er...Good work so far, soldier. I'm damn glad to baptize this chapter with it's first review.

Let's see what'cha got.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!