oh that was great and sexy *cries* so good keep on typing

IT WAS SO COOL I MEAN IT WAS SO GREAT WRITE MORE PLEASE!

This was the best that I have read so far. You should continue the chapter.

I love all the chapters

Nice writing skills

Please write some more

This is a really good story! i love it! please finish it im dying to kno what happens next! thx!

Hello!
Please, i beg you! Update soon!

HELLO! LONG TIME NO CHAT OR ANYTHING! IM SORRY SUPER BUSY!


OK LETS REVIEW!


So YAY Jiraya wakes up! If only it were manga true T_T! Glad he's up and running. AW SASUKE's afterlife experience with Itachi. It was super sad when Sasuke saw his mom and wanted to go to her. Then Itachi's message "I'll take care of her"...SO SAD! Oh sasuke!

I gotta say the bleeding tears was awesomely angsty. Sasuke just recovering from surgery and all and then going sharingna on tobi. Wow.

Sakura lost the baby. It was so painful to read her when she finally realizes whats missing.kawaii baby.

Naruto went 8 tails woot woot! AND YOU PUT YONDAIME! I LUV HIM! Yay naruot knows who his papa is now. Aw.

AND YAY FOR NO MORE MADARA AT THE END!

Finally some conclujsions ne? sort of anyway. Great chapter as usual.

Sniff...i mis kawai baby!

omg!!i just fell in love with the story and its sad to know tht its coming to an end.ur a great writer and i really hope u update soon c:

Hi I'm sorry about not R&Ring but I had no internet so I couldn't do it even if I really wanted too. Anyway I'm really happy that you like cut and combined some of the chapters to make it go faster I liked the battle scene it was pretty good.I would to see an epilogue to this story to wrap it up.

EPILOGUEE CHAPTERR RPLEASSE !

NO NOTT BE PREGOO;THERES TIME FOR THAT LATER !

NO DONT MAKE HER PREGNANT; NOT NOWW ! LIKEE WHEN SHES 19 OR AT LEAST UNTIL THEYVE BEEN BACK IN KONOHA FOR A WHILEE.

yay madara's dead :D
good job, this story really is amzing :D

I hope you put the next one very soon. I can't wait.

CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!
CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!
CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!
CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!
CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!

Hey great chapter, it took a long time though for it too update.
I think an epilogue is enough, no need for a sequal though.
ONce again Great Chapter!