satoshi doesent have amber eyes -_-

good story. please upload some more. it's interesting all six chapters of them.

after satoshi u put kun
unless u are calling satoshi a girl

i find this chapter very interesting and cool.im a huge pearlshipping fan and hoping for more chapters please.

Truly, this is an amazing story and l'd like to see you update soon. And l`ll check out your devART account too.
UPDATE!!

~Jayy

really good story! ^^

That is a coming good plot. For Satoshi I would chose Turwig to evolve in Grotle or futher to Torterra and chosee to capture a Riolu. For Hikari,she may evolve her Piplup to Prinplup or further to Empoleon. I don't think over a wild pokemon for her to capture. Sorry about my gramar and the pokemon names in Inglish.

Cool but what about the illness? :)

Great story.It is such a great one.I honestly thought Paul whould have a crush on Dawn and keep on trying to steal her away from Ash because he thinks he shoul get whatever He wants when he does not.

UPDATE SOON!

Dawn,May.Ash,I don't care,take ne or both.=)

Oh what a great story! Please update soon. :)

wow good battle sequence, gives me a little inspiration for my battle styles in the future

keep up the good work

wow this was good, very nyce love scene, keep it up

This is very good =D, I can't wait to read more =D

Ooh! Plot twist! Nice work.

That was cool. ^_^
I hope you update again!! =D