Reviews for Rightfully Mine

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nihongoneko 2008-05-31 ch 6,	abuseI feel really sorry for Ranma and Akane. Their past relationship didn't end well. But why did Akane say that she didn't love him? Still, that was pretty mean of Ranma and them to talk abuot the past like that. sincerely, nihongoneko
nihongoneko 2008-05-31 ch 5,	abuseI feel really sorry for Ryoga and Ranma. The ending sentence was sad. But the story itself seems good so far. sincerely, nihongoneko
Pyromage Shikaze 2008-03-12 ch 6,	abuseAlthough, I do not agree with the word usage that some of these other reviewers said, but this is not a piece of fanfiction. Rather a fiction with the Ranma cast pasted on them. there is no reference to the Ranma backstory that is in relation with what is in the manga. As such this does not qualify as a piece of fanfiction. Even some of the addventure stories are so off, but it still remained in the category of the fanfiction because it retained some part of the Ranma backstory. Though overall the story is coherent, and you are a good storyteller, but this is not a piece of fanfiction.
Tuisto 2008-03-08 ch 6,	abusewas der fick?! This is terrible, just terrible. While the writing is adequate as far as verbiage, tense and grammar goes, this story is just utterly and totally wrong. Like other reviewers have said; this isn't fanfiction. This is something original you've cooked-up and just stuck names from "Ranma1/2" onto. And -NO- this doesn't even qualify as an Alterverse. Bad form... and really, I can't fathom why some reviewers have praised this. I guess there's no accounting for taste. My recommendation to the authoress for this would be to change the names, add a little backstory and upload it to a site like Fictionpress. Because as this sits, it certainly doesn't qualify as FANfiction.
Nysk 2008-03-08 ch 6,	abuseNice chapter.. I love the digs at Akane when she cannot respond. well thought out.
goku90504 2008-03-08 ch 6,	abuseyou have an interesting plot how ever the spelling and grammar of this fic are atrocious you really should go back and fix it up from the beginning or get someone else to do it for you
nihongoneko 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abuseHelpful hints: For change of scenes, it would be easier to recognize them if you put some kind of indicator. And for thoughts, it would be easer to follow if they didn't have "" like the ones you use for speech. My outlook: Wow, Ranma has a dark past. Intriguing. :) I wouldn't think that anyone would be able to get Nabiki infuriated. Of course, she got back at him just where it hurts, so she hasn't been changed much here at all. I'm glad. I can't see Nabiki as anything else. Not really. I can't wait for the next chapter. Well, actually I can. But you know what I mean. :) sincerely, nihogoneko
nihongoneko 2007-07-18 ch 3,	abuseDoesn't sound like Ranko and Ukyou get along well. But not like hate, they just don't seem like someone who would be near the other in other circumstances. I can't believe Ranma is so male egotistical here too. I bet that'll be interesting in the future. :) And I'm glad you're continuing the story, even though you're only doing it for your friend. :) I want to find out the ending too. sincerely, nihogoneko
Xero Reflux Strike 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abuseY'know, I can't beleive people actually praise this thing. Honestly, the only thing this fic shares with Ranma 1/2 is the names of the characters. If it was a good fic anyway I could understand, but Hell, it's really not. All it is, from what I can tell, is just some retarded wannabe romance thing. The quality of which, if possible, is worse then those cruddy paperbacks you find at the 99 cent store. Oh, and you seem to have broken a rule. Since this clearly isnt a Ranma fic, you have it in the wrong catagory. I suggest you move this over to fictionpress, although I certainly dont wish it on them, and join your fellow empty-headed pre-teens in the wannabe romance section. Now I'm going to go wash my eyes out... I wonder where I put my sulfuric acid.
Vex The Warlord 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseStop it. STOP IT RIGHT NOW! Listen you little pre-teen sissy girl. If you want to get the shiney warm feeling of praise for your writing. Then learn to write something that actually BELONGS IN THE CATEGORY YOU ARE WRITING ABOUT! Fanfiction is about taking the existing characters, the majority of the existing canonity, and taking it into a new direction, independant of what the original writer had done. Write about what would happen if Ranma was cursed with spring of drowned Dragon instead of Girl. Write about what would happen if Ranma and Ryoga were actually brothers. DON'T WRITE A Romance for you and your little 11 year old friends to masterbate to! Because that's what you did, you wrote some crappy romance, then glued the names of the Ranma cast over the originals. If you want reviews, you have to ** listen to all of them, NOT JUST THE ONES SINGING PRAISES! Listen to the harsh reviews, listen to the insults and improve your fic so they won't insult it. And you know what us reviewers that matter have said? "This Fiction, is a failure."
jdcocoagirl 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abusewow its getting interesting... update soon.
Habana 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abuseI hope you will finish this story. I want to know why Ranma is so bitter, what happened?
nihongoneko 2007-06-27 ch 2,	abuseInteresting plot. I can't wait to read the next chapter. =) sincerely, nihogoneko
AnimeRockStar88 2007-06-15 ch 2,	abuseThis is really great plot i cant wait to find out more on ranmas past and for akane to ditch Ryoga Ew update soon
xicekiss 2007-06-14 ch 2,	abuseHey! I really like the story you wrote i hope you can continue writing and also update faster!! I will keep on reading ur stories. Thanx alot i enjoy reading ur story. My real name is Jenny

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