Reviews for A Second Chance for Redemption

Reviews For: A Second Chance for Redemption

Atravir 2008-06-23 ch 5,	abuseBizarre, confusing, and awesome at the same time. Very interesting descriptions. And undead Mimigas, that's a nice touch.
zero9g9 2008-06-17 ch 5,	abuseResists urge to smack you Finally. :'D The story has taken an interesting turn... I can't wait to see what's hiding around the corner.
FantasyDreamer170 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseHey there Fusion. Listen, I'd so be private messaging you this but it seems you've turned that option off. I like this story, but the main purpose of this review is to get through to you. Could you please email me ASAP? ~Sarah H.
Prominence 2008-01-28 ch 4,	abuseHuzzah! It's balrog! =D This story's a refreshingly different take on Cave Story. I do wonder, though... Is Curly going to make an appearance somehow? I do realize this is supposed to be after the bad ending... but... =/ Still, I look forward to the next chapter. =p
zero9g9 2007-10-11 ch 4,	abuseYes, I forgot to story alert this. Sorries. X_X Internal organs aren't designed to fly?! Oh, jeez, that would've been good advice for my spleen a minute or two ag- A splat is heard in the distance -...crap. Either way, Makes sure he's checked the Story Alert box this time I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :D
Skylark Starflower 2007-10-09 ch 4,	abuseI would have reviewed this sooner, but for the last several days, I've only been able to use a computer that wouldn't open the review window. ^_^; Sorry about that. Anyway... This is really starting to get interesting now. Even if it had nothing to do with Cave Story, I think I'd keep reading it. ^_^ But HUZZAH! Can't wait to see the big guy make his appearance. Good stuff. More now! ^_^ Dances
Raynor Zeraph 2007-10-05 ch 4,	abuseGreat new chapter. Still great explanations, and as always the atmosphere is incredible. Can't wait for the next one, and contemplating who you'll kill. :P
Atravir 2007-09-29 ch 4,	abuseVery nice. Finally a solid link to cave story. I await the next chapter eagerly. Although I still wonder if there are any Mimigas left in this one, mutated or not.
zero9g9 2007-09-05 ch 3,	abuseI like it. :0 The cliffhanger at the end makes me want to read more, but there ain't no more D: Make more? Please? D: Interesting so far, at either rate.
Atravir 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. This looks like it was professionally written. I can;t wait to read the next chapters. 9 out of 10
Raynor Zeraph 2007-08-05 ch 3,	abuseAwesome story. First three chapters, only one mentioning of anything remotely Cave Story. I've read all the stories in this section, and really, only two or so can even be compared with this one. Awesome story, fantastic characters, amazing character development, and to top it off, you can explain the action scenes in a way that doesn't bore or repeat itself. I mean... That's hard, and I know it... Awesome story, can't wait for more... five gold stars!
Skylark Starflower 2007-08-03 ch 3,	abuseWell, maybe it didn't have much plot, but I still did find it rather intersting. And now, I dunno why, but I almost wanna try to draw Rigel, though I'm terrible with armour of any sort. ^_^ So, do I get cake now? ^_^ Hee hee.
Skylark Starflower 2007-07-13 ch 2,	abuseO, I think I know who the mysterious people were! It's Doctor Claw! ...I'm a retart. ^_^ Tee hee hee. I dunno, this seems like a good chapter to me, but honestly, I'm looking forward to when it starts having a bit more to do with Cave Story. So, good work so far, and I can't wait for more! Mwee hee hee! ^_^
TEH NUKEMAHN 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseEllo! Can I copy from mS Word to here, and from here to MS Word? No copy & paste buttons - confuzzling.. from the one and only - TEH NUKEMAN (with a packet of LAYS)
Skylark Starflower 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseI cannot tell a lie...well, I can, but I won't. ^_^ It's interesting, and I like it, but so far it doesn't seem to have much at all to do with Cave Story. But you did say that at the beginning, so I knew what I was getting into. ^_^ I would like to see more of this, though, so write some more, kay?

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