This is another good one, a bit too long for a one-shot though. Splitting it up into two or three chapters might have been better. Interesting original idea though, and nice work with these characters, as usual.

I just have to say that I absolutely love how you write MWPP. This is the second story I've read about them by you and both times I just burst out laughing every time the Marauders are talking. You write humor very excellently!

Really interesting story. I liked it. I do feel the need to be the annoying Latin buff and point out that "caveat canem," is translated literally as something more along the lines of "let him(/her/it) beware of the dog." Generally, the phrase used is "cave canem," which is a simple command: "beware of the dog." Unless you mean "caveat canis," which means, "let the dog beware," but I don't think you do. I guess that technically "caveat canem" works, but "cave canem" is how the Romans would put it on their pretty mosaics.

Sorry. I'll stop now. Good story.

Totally original, very good job.

_ Great fic, love everything about it. Amused you as well as worries you about the characters fate. I loved it.

Very good story! And yes, Kali the Destroyer is nothing like the Devil. She destroys the old worlds so that new ones can be created. I really enjoy reading your stuff!

This is such a good story! Well thought out and proportionate storyline (which not many people think of following TT;;) I love it! It was written in a different style from the other stories I've read by you and definately less humoristic but it was still just as awesome. More writing

..::Sophie::..

It is purely by chance that I happened to read this fic immediately after Moonlight Discoveries. Quite a coincidence, though.

Well, I found this fic absolutely marvelous! I was a bit wary of Kali from the beginning...She seemed very Mary Sue-ish to me. Fortunately, she turned out to be an evil demon. -sigh of relief- I can't stand Mary Sues.

I look forward to reading more of your stories!

RSA

When Kali took one glance at Remus and didn't like him, I knew she wasn't fully human. I mean, any human who is attracted to males and isn't attracted to Remus is simply insane! IMHO, at least.

Great story. I loved the way Remus tells James he's being a jerk toward Lily, the way James trys to break free when he realizes that Remus was right, the entire conflict in the tunnel, and the partial explanations in the hospital wing. "Why we were fighting?" "Oh, James was just trying to keep Sirius from murdering Remus is all." Maybe it's better that Lily and Remus keep that tidbit to themselves.

Even I know about pheremones! And I'm 13! Of course, I'm not a science buff, I learned of them through Douglas Adams. Fwee. Write more.

Tis good.

-TL, who doesnt feel like signing in. Bah.

I liked it a lot, but it is not your best work.

Wow!

Your best story

Hm. Pheremones. I think I've read about them in The Ellimist, by K.A. Applegate. It's in the Animorphs series. Just a brief mention.

Well done on all counts! It's nice to see talent combined with a thorough thinking-things-through job. I dub you my favorite MWPP author. Write on!

WOW! what a fantastic story. You make them so real. I love the personalities that you give them. You are an excellent writer.