It must be hard to keep balance in midair with only one wing, huh? Poor Sephiroth - he'll fly soon! Then he can do those dramatic entrances/exits he loves so much.

Wow, I can't believe you actually wrote this! And that I missed first post...

Marlin and Sephiroth has got to be the weirdest teacher/student combo I've ever seen. But then, that's what makes it so interesting..:D

XD Yay, Merlin and Sephiroth, what an unlikely pair.

This came out really well! I like how you have a little of Sephiroth's pride in there too; it's a good addition to his character.

See you. I hope to feel better tomorrow. x.X

This is a really great story. It just makes me feel good.. and the quality of writing is exceptionally nice :D I'm going to read more of your work! Keep it up!