Hey, this was good! Thanxs for uploading this fic!

plz make another chapter it's so good

xyz1515 ^_^

yay! finally a YxS fanfic again. been a long time since i've read about them. your story was lovely. hmm, although i must admit that i never thought yzak would be the one to confess, he has a ego far too big. (: well done, i love it.

Erm. "Her silver hair was tied back in a ponytail, with just a strand covering his piercing eyes." You mean HIS silver hair, yes? Granted I haven't seen enough of Destiny to catch Shiho in person yet (haha, I just said 'in person,' wow) but she has brown hair, doesn't she? So I assumed that was a typo. :P

Whoa. Did Yzak just flat out confess his love to her, right like that? ... 0_o Okay, so maybe to me that's a little out of character, but I still like it.

Aww, cute song indeed.

Bwahaha, I love it that everyone is so scandalized after they kiss. Those reactions are priceless.

Hmm, cute. I'm glad they basically told everyone to buzz off and just walked out together, away from all the superficial poo-heads.

Hahaha, a cooling pad for your laptop. :P I could use one of those now and then too. But hey, your hot laptop just means your writing is SMOKIN'. That's pretty good in my opinion. Nicely written as always!

I should seriously be bashed over the head with a dripping pile of slop for waiting so long to review your latest stuff. I've been so busy. I'm sorry!

Aw damn, you're making me like Yzak/Shiho. I feel like Dearka is endangered. Sheesh. I LOVE the way you write Shiho though, hahaha. She's as fiery as Yzak is! Damn. I wouldn't want to make her mad at me.

You have the beautiful imagery flying thick and fast along with all those "if onlys." I love your diction. So much. Every time I wonder where you come up with such clever phrases. THE SUPPLY OF AMAZING SENTENCES NEVER ENDS. And every time it makes me go back and read things twice.

I also like the close parallels you use between Yzak and Shiho. They really are a lot alike. XD

"She wondered what a girl Miriallia must have been to make this reckless womanizer lovesick." I think we all wonder that from time to time. :P Oh, Dearka, how I love him and the way he gets serious when someone he really loves comes into the picture.

Ohh, this is good. Onward to the next chapter indeed.

ahh i liked the ending, and especially for a fic you had no idea what you were doing, you did a nice job:)

yay! how sweet! but erm... it's ended already? has it? hope not!

that was actually really, nice. i liked it a lot, and it seemed to say a lot about Y's and S's political backgrounds. Really nice. :)

WOW I love their POVs about those irritating people at the front! It's really what I sometimes picture when some of my teachers talk to me. The words have a nice flow to them and also, you managed to depict a picture in the readers' minds, aiding them in being able to better understand and sympathise with the characters themselves. CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2!
Though, so sad! It's only a two-part :(

this is really good.so sad so far...can't wait for part 2! update soon pls. hope it doens't end too too depressing. :P

cool start! i wish it could be longer than a two shot, but hey i'm glad you're writting another YS fic:)

This is gonna be good...
Keep it up.