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| ReJo 2007-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseMy mind wouldn't let me believe that it was anybody but Lindsay. I really like your coy writing style. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHey! This was great... i love that song.. And it was perfect... Danny is such a guy... Aint it funny how sometimes guys are more girly than us LOL... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| Baby Jefer 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI knew it was her! I love stories like that! |
| wjobsessed 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. Such a tease, Lindsay is. :) |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! It was so beautiful and sweet! I loved the way you wrote Lindsay, she was so funny lol Great work! :D |
| mabelreid 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, it was very sexy and emotional. I could see it happening in my head. I truly think Lindsay would do something like that, and of course Danny would lose the battle of restraint LOL |
| SallyJetson 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseAh I just love the imagery of this line... quote-She pouted adorably, her lips glistening in the soft light And he is trying so hard on all levels isn't?. quote-'Now listen to me. You are going to leave. It’s...' he glanced at the clock, '11:45 and I want you out of here before midnight, at least then we can say this didn’t happen on the day itself.' Ahh Danny gets in the perfect answer. quote-But you made love to her anyway?' 'She was desperate...' and in the end quote-it was just the two of them, lost in a perfect moment in their perfect day. *sigh* I love happy D/L moments! |
| notesofwimsey 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseAw! So cute - I loved how frustrated and annoyed and aroused Danny was; trying so hard to "be good" and failing so perfectly! What a wench Lindsay turned out to be! |