he is such a voyeur!!

yep, she'll hit him alright.

i liked this-- i can just imagine that in a couple days he's walking into tokyo for supplies and gets accosted by the girl from the pond. ahh, coincedences *le sigh* and the rest is history.

just kidding.

one thinks she knew he was watching ~_^

delighted,
ginny
♥

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ooh, i like it. very sweet and well written =] fav

that was a touching fic. love it!

Very sweet. A new way for Kenshin and Kaoru to meet.

cute!

good fic

It was an very good cute story. Too bad they did not get to meet. He skulked in the shadow and was looking at something he wanted. Wished he was more forward and took hold of the pixie that was frolicking in the pond. She was unaware of the man that was taking pleasure in her happiness. Although not a stalker completely he was bordering and I wanted he to step on a twig so that Kaoru would be alerted and that they could meet. Or since he likes to train in the clearing near the area she could in turn be spying on him or something, but if this is where you leave us I am satisfied because Kenshin was to adorable to be mad at his actions.

Cute story! (just an fyi: it's gi.)

This is definately a cute little story, though I am sad to see its end. Maybe you could write a sequel...?
KEEP ON WRITING!

The site says that there are three reviews to this story, but I only can see one of them (?) so I apologize if someone has already told you that it's usually spelled "gi", not "gee". It doesn't really matter, since it's all translated from the Japanese characters. I really liked this story- very cute. Both the first and last lines were very catchy, and it was very in character. Thanks for writing it :-)

Much love! By the way, the spelling's "gi".

It's a bit confuisng as to whether or not Kenshin is living with Kaoru in this fic- he should be, but he treats her almost as a stranger, but he mentions about him being hit, so ya.

And it's spelt gi, not gee. And bokken, not boken. And when you said she rolled up her pants, it should be she rolled up her hakama- and, because I continue to be obessed, once she took off her gi she'd be only in her breat bindings, not any kind of shirt.

Oh, and technically Kenshin wears a kimono, not a gi, but people tend to not know that/ignore that.

But, besides these inconstiences that I point out simply because I'm obessed, it really WAS a delightful story. Cute, heh. :). Sorry I'm so nitpickety.

I am so sorry *bows* but what is the "gee" that is mentioned?
lobe the fic btw :) awesome (lol I just learned awseome had a e after the w yesterday-I felt so stupid I'm gonna be an eighth grader next year >