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| Graymoon74 2007-12-14 ch 2,  | abuseThis is so good. |
| Graymoon74 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseLove it. |
| locardxchange 2007-12-08 ch 4, | abuseI love these, there great. I just hope you come up with Warrick, maybe Docs and/or David. |
| shortie990 2007-10-05 ch 4, | abuseI have to give you props on your story. So well written. My fave part was when Jim was telling his story and meantioned the part with grissom kissing sara in the parking lot. Beautifully written. I hope you will write more. |
| taramis 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseOMG - the Brass story was soo funny! I was wondering why Grissom didn't just walk off! Hah! Totally unexpected. I liked Greg's story, introspective and sweet. Nick was cute, and Cath seeing Griss at dinner was great. Wunnerful stories! Thanks! ~taramis |
| onebsmom 2007-08-23 ch 4, | abuseGreat story. I have to say I loved the Brass one the best. After Sara and Grissom, Brass is the best one on the show. |
| buckit 2007-08-22 ch 4, | abusei really enjoyed your story. especially brass' story i could pitcure it as i was reading thanks |
| LouAnn 2007-08-17 ch 4, | abuseThat was hilarious. I loved Brass' story. Dill the fish expert, LOL, I love that. Great job. |
| contrarymotion 2007-08-16 ch 4, | abuseUnca Jimmy tells a stowee! (that's how my niece would say it). Fantastic concept. Dill and Tara eh? I did pause to wonder why Gil sat through all that, but the second last line answered my quesitons...*g* Fav line:"Well, it's the end of MY story, I didn't say it was the end of theirs." Keep it coming! |
| cookie-geek 2007-08-14 ch 4, | abuseGreat story! your characterization is really good! loved it |
| amisha.pineapple 2007-08-14 ch 4, | abuseThat had to be my favourite chapter. I really loved that. I can definitely see Brass doing something like that to keep Grissom occupied. Loved that Grissom was handcuffed. Didn't expect that. Amisha x |
| GSfanatic 2007-08-13 ch 4, | abuseHilarious. Just hilarious. "Could you uncuff me first?" I did not see that coming, although I was wondering how Brass made Grissom stay put while he told the story. Yeah, I bet the cuffs were the only way to make Grissom listen to him. What other choice would he have, right? Loved the way Brass found out about the GSR. That was very sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter |
| U-Luv-CSI-House-2 2007-08-13 ch 4, | abuseOkay, this chapter had me going "aw..." and crying...BUT...THEN I WAS LAUGHING AT THE END WITH THE HANDCUFF'S SO HARD THAT MY MOTHER CAME INTO THE ROOM AND ASKED ME WHAT WAS WRONG...I was totally not expecting that which made it funnier. Thank you! |
| SammieAtHome 2007-08-13 ch 4, | abuseLoved Brass in this one! The story he told was funny! When this one is finished you could right a humor story from Brass's POV! |
| VegasButterfly 2007-08-13 ch 4, | abusei love it it is so funny keep going :) |