I have been looking for a story like this for a long time now.
I've never been very good at saying things as elegantly as I would like to so I'll put it plainly: This is a very very good story that I have really "got into" and enjoyed. I wish you well please update soon.

i love it!! hrist is by far my favorite valerie. and im loving the background story you've given her as leone.

This story is freaking beautiful! i cant wait to see the next chapter

Wowzers! Long chapters, good story, and my favorite Valkyrie all together. Can't really think of anything bad to say about the story thus far, aside from some punctuation errors, but i am thoroughly entertained here. Anyways, i'll see what i come up with when i read more.

Gah, you keep upping the ante, as my family says. Just when we think it can't get any more gaspingly dramatic, the next cliff-hanger is worse! Looking forward much to the next chapter.

That was an awesome chapter. I loved the interlude between Lucien and Aeila. I can't wait to read more. and I'm really excited about the mystery person speaking with Hrist. Thanks for updating. Can't wait to read more!

Great chapter! This is getting interesting. I hope arngrim shows up somewhere. well, time will tell. Thanks for posting. can't wait to read more!

I loved the reunion between Alicia and Rufus! I hope they discover each other somehow. And I loved Hrists parting words! I hope it doesnt stirr too many waves with Freya. Awesome chapter. I can't wait for more!

This just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad Alicia is in the picture. It looks like Freya's plotting something of her own. And now i'm curious about what Freya's holding behind her back. Another great chapter. i'm off to read the next :)

What a twist! Alicia as an einherjar! Awesome! And I can't wait to see what will happen when she meets up with lucien. I'm really exicted to see what happens next and how hrist changes with the growing reunion!

yet another great chapter! I loved all the familiar faces. Lucian, Alicia, and the old artolian gang. and even fortuna/silmeria. this was yet another great chapter! Keep up the great work! i'm off to the next chapter!

That was an awesome chapter! I loved how you keep Rufus true to his original personality and still offering compassion where he can. I also like how Hrist is more remorseful and sensative to blind viciousness. A caring but firm commanding personality. It's great! I can't wait to read more.

Great retelling of the first game. I'm really enjoying this so far. I love how you have Hrist reprise the role of Arngrim as the heroic nucleaus of the artolian brigade. Nice work with that. Great job. You're an excellent writer and I can't wait to read more. Hopefully Arngrim will be in it.

Yah! Update time!!

Interesting look into Kashell and co. Their interactions with Lucian were well-dialogued.

Lucian is such a...fop sometimes. I keep thinking of Raoul from Phantom of the Opera. ^^

Mystina was well-written! Her thoughts and words were great--even how she interacted with Hrist and Alicia!

Nice tying-up chapter. Looking forward to Flenceburg and possibly a Lezard appearance!

Oh, Hrist is so silly. "Forgive me." ^o^


--Mena

At last... well, as what it show... i'm longing for next chappter... when Lucian meets Mystina and Hrist... ROFL...