kind of like it but it's not really a romance

You wrote a really wonderful story and great characterizations for all the hosts especially Kyoya.

You use the language well, though. Keep writing. It's great!

Thanks.

This was very well written for English not being your first language and your first fic. I loved it, loved it a lot!

Lovely! Dives a bit more into the hosts' heads. I like Kyouya's logic and foresight.

You write really well! Even for an English native.
I liked it.

This rocked!

Your Kyouya is so awesome!!

fantastically written! i loved all the 'unmentioned' scenes that never quite got explained in the first chapter! please write more ouran fanfics!!

o.O You can't be serious! I seriously thought you only spoke English, but that was a bit wrong for me to do, wasn't it? Anyway, this fanfic is REALLY interesting. I'm always wondering what goes behind Kyouya's outer layer. You did a wonderful job in portraying his feelings and personalities. Also, I commend your ability in describing how the hosts acted before Haruhi came along. They were freakin pent up. You helped me realize a lot of points about Ohshc and how hard it would be for them to have girlfriends. Sweet Job. :D

That was amazing! Amazing! I love how you made each character seem more real, more in depth.It was brilliant!

lol! I like it! (^__^). He dreamt of 8million vases...lol!

Really enjoyed this one shot :)

Devo admitir que yo tambien estuve tentada a escribir un review en ingles, pero lamentablemente mi gramatica da pena y terminaria llegando tarde a mis compromisos por tratar de escribir un solo parrafo (me tomaria mas de media hora)

Bueno que decir, he estado leyendo algunas de tus traducciones y me decidi a leer algo enteramente tuyo, eres tan bueno o mejor que los escritores para los que traduces, yo misma eh intentdo entrar en este tipo de proyectos, pero ademas de floja soy muy iresponsable.

"The shadow king" siempre pense que seria frio y claculador, tu fic me ha dado un nuevo punto de vista de Kyouya y su afeccion por Haruhi, me converti en fan del Host Club apenas hace un par de dias, gracias a la incistencia de mi prima hemos visto los primeros 16 capitulos (gracias YouTube) y bueno que al final si voy a llegar tarde... que remedio, me encanta lo clara y limpia que es tu escritura y la manera tan biene structurada de desarrollar la trama, tendre que volver a ver el priemr capitulo, piensas seguirlo? seria maravilloso adentrarse mas en la mente de Kyouya...

interesting view in the beginning of this story...

beautiful writing, are you going to continue?