that, my friend, is the most beautiful, and most profound piece of work I've ever read from you before.
i mean, i'm almost completely speechless.
it was sad, yet happy.
good, yet, i wasn't even entirely sure if i understood it.
i know i did, but part of me says, "Holy friggin crap."
It was so deep, I'm like, "Did I really just understand that?"
I would like more of an explanation, like whose the narrator?
:]
btw.
im pissed your computer your crashed. D:
thats pretty shitty.
hope it gets fixed soon and your back on :D
btw.
if you ever get bored, you can read my story if you want :]
k byes!

=(=(=( That's soo sad! Honestly, it did exactly what it was supposed to, it completely played with people's emotions. True talent, amazing stuff ^^

o.o...if this would fit, I would be tempted to but this in my signature. I'm tempted to copy this down and write it on all my notebooks. I going to print it out...and hang it on my wall...yes...muah ha ha...ahem, excuse me...[again, i be's scary]

Gosh...Neiize, i know im the angsty type but...tragic
crack..crush...THRASH
my heart is broken as in pieces
man, the story touched me greatly. i do not go for tragic suicides, but like yourself (who doesnt go for lemons) i tend to read a few good ones. this definitely is going to my favs!!
a job welldone!!

Dedicated to me? That's like a first!
You broke my heart! Dx In a good way though!~

oh-em-gee! This was just such a sad and wonderful read! Ah, I love your writing it's so fabulous, exhilerating, and you inspire me.

This is fantastic. Alright, I'm reviewing!

I'm guessing the Narrator is Kai, only because of the word choice and the whole calmness of it all... if I'm wrong shoot me~

I like how it's a whole different sensation. It feels like a just a small piece of something so much bigger.
I think you captured each character's thoughts exceptionally well.

I also loved how the enitire thing was a mystery! And at the end!

//I loved you, Ray.
And after all these years, one thing remains persistent.
You never cease to amaze me.\\

It was a heartbreaker!
Beautifully written, and an utterly fantastic idea!

Thank you!~ I.I

Hi! Me again. This is very powerful, and very well written. It really draws you in and makes you think. It's a change for you, it's not witty or sarcastic or... well, humourous in anyway, but that's not to say it isn't good. Because it's fabulous. Really, this story is superbly well written and the idea is very well developed. Excellent job.

Wow, Siriously, my eyes are filled with tears. I can't even thing of words to discribe it, its just so beyond amazing. You are a great writer. Some parts of this just get you in the heart, and it conects you with the words you used. Truly a piece of art!

OMG.
it's like, so sad.