Amazing, this is great!

that ending was so cute

very well written as well

two thumbs up

that was really ... sweet. i didn't quite now what word to decribe it... but i know i do like it.

good job

- E

Amazing! Genius! Incredible!

Its no wonder why you had it copy righted.

If I had written this, I would have too.

You should send it to Stephanie Meyer!

Ok, that was so good! your a good poet! write another one, cuz you sure can write poems good!

Agony

wow, your poem just kicked my poems poor ass...

I love it!

That was a really great poem and i loved it