 Angelicatt 2009-03-01 . chapter 1I liked it. Ichigo is stubborn but Orohime's love for him is just what he needs |
 Shari Joy Rose 2008-05-16 . chapter 1Another cute story. I love them. |
 Atemu'sLotus 2008-03-13 . chapter 1Yeah! They are a couple.
That was so cute. Poor Yuzu is so clueless.
Thanks for writing!! |
 Hasabusa 2007-07-02 . chapter 1Wow, so nice. Not too fluffy, not too dull. Just right. |
 Alatarial Elf 2007-06-18 . chapter 1Aw! This was so cute! Too cute!! A nice little thing to brighten someone's day at least a little bit ^.^ Thank you :) |
 Princess Ashes 2007-06-16 . chapter 1Cute story!
Nice job! |
 Armageddon Angel 2007-06-15 . chapter 1This is alright. I think it would have better if you had played up the Ichi/Hime relationship but other than that, you have a solid piece. |
 Ayjah 2007-06-15 . chapter 1Sweet, I am never sure which pairing I like more - Chad or Ichigo with Orihime |
 Twix10 2007-06-14 . chapter 1As usual, a really good read from you. I'm just sorry it won't be eligible for the Tanabata competition but please, please write another for it. I love reading your work. Join the message board too. It's really fun there and we would love to have you. |
 Sechskies 2007-06-14 . chapter 1 Hey! It's good that you're gonna join the contest. We need as many entries as we can get! :D
However, I need to remind you that all entries for the contest shouldn't be shown until July 8-15. You have to send it straight to Lady Orihime (the moderator for the contest) for she will be the one who'll unveil the entries on their specificied dates. Since you posted this ficcie already, this doesn't qualify for the contest anymore. =\
Anyways, I enjoyed reading this one. Another sequel to 'Coming Undone', yesh? =D There was one misspelled word I've noticed, but other than that, the ficcie was perfectly written. Very good job!! And good luck with the contest! ^_^
Btw, I enocurage you to join the exclusive IchiHime forum, "Five Lifetimes, One Love". The peepz there will surely be psyched to have you as a member!! =) |
 Raven the Ravenous 2007-06-14 . chapter 1Sweet, very sweet. Uh, what's the Tanabata festival anyway? |
 snowleaf 2007-06-13 . chapter 1Sweet. Ahh, I like how Orihime has become as important as his mother. |
 xbRiNgMEtheHORizoNx 2007-06-13 . chapter 1i |
 eiji111 2007-06-13 . chapter 1 Very sweet! I loved the connection b/w Masaki and Orihime.
Nice to see another awesome Ichihime story written by you! |
 Porporino the III 2007-06-13 . chapter 1This was one very cheery one-shot. I really liked the whole "OMG did they just say 'girlfriend'?" thing at the end. And the yukata thing was really nice. I could definitely imagine Ichigo not having worn one since his mother passed on. So sad...but, JAPAN! Your going to Japan! That is so kickass! Your so LUCKY!
Ahem, now that that's out of my system, hope you have a fun and safe trip. |