I love this story, it is gorgeous in imagery... The last chapter is so sad, poor Erik... The words just wrap you in the story, entwining me into it, I feel like I know the characters personally :) Please continue, I hope to see more of Erik and Kate together! They make such a sweet couple! xx

okay, i loved the ending sentiment with erik's head bowed, his heart overwhelmned with emotion and sadness all at the same time. I thought that was really well done. I would have like a small kiss perhaps but the woman just lost her husband, so embracing will have to do. Lol, i think you should really continue this story hopefully you have read ALL of my reviews, great job and ubdate soon, I'm looking forward to it...

wow...i feel like crying with the characters, this chapter was realy strong and the plot of the story was very well put together. i guess that answered one of my questions. Keep writing you're doing an out standing job, keep up the great work...

i love your story you should really continue it. I've read many fan fictions based off phantom of the opera and your story is one of the very best that i've read. I've read almost the entire thing and i don't want it to end. I have only one question, or two if i may, what exactly was kate grabbing? If it is what i think it is, well you have quite the imagination, i was laughing hysterically when i read that but i wasn't sure of "it" though,(i had two things in mind) so maybe you can fill me in. Also, her husband, is your story based on entirely erik and kate falling in love or are they going to fall in love and then go their separate ways because of the marriage? I would prefer erik and kate to have a happy ending. I think your writing is amazing. They way you put into the third person point of view is highly regonized and also appreciated. Great job keep it up while i continue reading...

Time has to pass before she can make a choice. She has to say her farewells to her husband. Once that is done, then she can begin to address her feelings for Erik. It may take time, if only he can wait. More please.

Oh, how sad for her. Erik knows he's losing her and she may never come back. At least she allowed him to comfort her while she grieves for her husband. More please.

This chapter starts out so happily and ends up so sadly. ERik has no idea why. She can't begin to tell him. Reading on.

How charming their rememberances are of one another and their night of dancing. She was able to hear his music before they were interupted by the stage crew. Darkness and frightened hands found parts of Erik that had never been touched until now. LOL> After saying goodnight, she longs for John to return to her. Will she belittle herself later for having opened her heart to Erik? Reading on.

Of the two, Erik chose the one that would make him feel more at home and loved than he even knew. Christine is still innocent to things that are everyday with Kate. Reading on.

T.T how beautiful! that last part almost had me crying. i love how this story is coming along!! i can't wait to see how kate and erik fair while they are apart. keep up the excellent work!! please continue and update soon!

Interesting story so far. I like your lady, Kate. The Phantom had come to her aid and now returned her stolen items, leaving a rose with them. He watched her sleep musing about the two women he now had in his life. Reading on.

Well now you must think of something to stop this. She simply can't disappear from his life not now when he needs her. Perhaps time apart will make them both realize just how miserable life is without the other.

So sad. I have to say I saw her husbands death coming. It makes sense in a horrible sort of angsty way. It had to happen.

I wonder if her guilt will keep her from exploring how she feels for Erik? Having just reall come to know she cared deeply for Erik then learn of her husband's death has to be devastating. Hope she can work through it.

They have to end up together. They have to! I can't to read more.

Oh, and um...'fantically' was supposed to be 'fantastically.' Stupid typos. XD

(If you get this review before my other one, I apologize. Lol. Just click on the reviews for chapter 10.)

P.S.
Do you settings blocking anonymous reviews? That might also be another reason why you're not getting a lot of responses. A lot of reviewers don't sign in when they post. Kay, that's all. Ciao!