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Reviews for: Noticing Things
LadyKryptonite294
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
LOL aww that was cute how Jason just knew and how Lois reacted ^^ Very well written i luved it

Cee xx
Adventure-Seeking-Juliet
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
I luv the story!! Plzz update!
rhapsody-child-of-the-sky
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
this is great
xyvortex
2007-11-02 . chapter 1
OOh! I hope you continue this!
HoVis
2007-06-14 . chapter 1
Lol... Jason has to drop Clark in it! Great start, I hope this continues - I love the fact that a little kid notices what no one else does (out of the mouths of babes...).

Looking forward to more!

HoVis
Nautica7mk
2007-06-14 . chapter 1
I like it. Short, sweet and very revealing. I always thought it would be a cool idea for Jason to reveal Clark's secret inadvertantly. With Jason, it's direct and sincere with no falseness about it. Clark has always been too complicated for his own good. lol
DaggerPen
2007-06-14 . chapter 1
I've always loved the "Jason tells Mommy" reveal. Excellent work. Is this TBC, or a one-shot?
Blueowl
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
Heehee ^^
I liked this, it was a cool way for Lois to find out the truth.
Shado Librarian
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
I love it - Jason the wise trying to comfort his mom saying Clark will be right back.
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