A very good idea: Nerevarine Day. Logical as well. I like festivals. They're fun to write about. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

Interesting setup you got there. Certainly a story with potential. Nice descriptive writing.

Nice teamwork of the Argonians and the Khajiit, complementing each others abilities. Kinda reminds me of Baldur's Gate, too bad Morrowind doesn't really allow for partymembers and coördinated battles. Luckily we have our own imagination and writer's skill ;-)

I hope you'll gradually put in some background information about how the three teammembers came together, but I'm sure you're already working on that.

Good job, I'm already looking forward to the next chapters! *added to story alert list*