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Starowner
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
Come on hurry with chap 6!
Starowner
2009-09-14 . chapter 5
Hurry up, Hurry up, Hurry up! Sorry I just love this series.
Giulia
2009-04-10 . chapter 5
Look, I was planning to Sign Up just to review your fanfic, but I found out that I can review even without being logged in :D
First of all, I apologize for all the mistakes and grammar errors I'll make (I'm neither English nor American, I'm studying English as second language and I can't speak it perfectly yet). And... I'm in love with your fanfic. I really love the entire plot and your style is GREAT: i adore the way you write, how you describe the characters, how you make their personalities and all of their gestures seem so real. I hope you will keep up your work, I'm addicted to this fic! It's like two months I'm looking for some good Digimon fanfic all around the Internet (expecially about Tamers :3 ), and I've finally found something that really catches me. Great job, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
TitanNegro
2009-04-09 . chapter 5
o my god,i love it dude,you so danm good.Just please dont take too much longer to update,i know how hard iit is to write a fic,but,im just cant wait to see how this will go,so pls updatw as soon as u can.
Lycoris Calantha
2009-03-21 . chapter 5
I really do like this. It seems very interesting. ^.^ Well, granted that I don't remember over half of Tamers, I think it's good and I look forward to reading more of this! Good luck!

... and if you're curious as to why I don't actually regularly read Tamers fics and am reading your, I saw it at TMB.
SiriusAllPunked
2009-03-15 . chapter 5
Okay...I'm gonna make this short and sweet. UPDATE!
Rainbow35
2009-03-12 . chapter 5
This still good, kepp writing! :)
E.S. Simeon
2009-03-11 . chapter 5
Now, this is getting to be very nice. Seeing as how Ruki is always trying to avoid anyt matter that has to do with Jenrya. Quite an interesting way to put things really, hehe. This seems to be building up to quite a nice setting with events slowly unfolding.

Besides all that, maybe the chapter length could be extended to a little bit longer to tell of the more interesting events that are unfolding. Anyway, pretty good approach to the situation with Ruki dealing with Jenrya's presence.
fire dragonheart
2009-03-11 . chapter 5
nice
Mrs. Radcliffe 13
2009-03-10 . chapter 5
Lol. It's like when you tell yourself, "Don't say it...don't say it..." and then it comes out of your mouth. So Kazu and Suzie after all then... That's an unusual paring. Love the story, but make longer chapters :D
Some1 U Dunno
2009-02-28 . chapter 4
YAYZ! I didn“t see this going to be updated! Good job and continue, please! :3
fire dragonheart
2009-02-27 . chapter 4
nice
E.S. Simeon
2009-02-27 . chapter 4
Now that's quite a nice way to end the chapter. There could be room for improvements in some parts of the chapter, but it's all right.

Anyway, it is really interesting how you are bringing the plot in this direction right now. Many things could come out of the situation, especially how the characters are interacting right now. Again, the ending of this chapter was magnificent, simply keeps the whole thing more interesting, keep on writing.
Mrs. Radcliffe 13
2009-02-26 . chapter 4
Loved both chapters! Especially how quickly they were updated! So Kazu loves Suzie? Way to leave a cliffy. Poor Rika.
And last I checked my hair didn't have any gray. Only red and brown :)
Rainbow35
2009-02-26 . chapter 4
Suzie is so cute! She's older than me, but she just acts so cute! Anyway, this is getting really, really, good! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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