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Jessiquie
2008-10-03 . chapter 7
YAY new chapters.
Poor Coop. And Portman!
Loving the story still!
and I love the new 90210 series! Never watched the old one, but i think this one is awesome!
awtr101fan
2008-10-02 . chapter 7
“Oh my God, date her Portman,” Parker suggested, turning around to face Portman, who made a face.


this was such a great line. i totally luved it & could so picture how hyper parker had 2 b when she said it.
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“You are really really cute,” Portman said as if it was a revelation.

“What?” Jamie asked, her eyes wide. She laughed. “You must be drunk.”

“I mean it,” Portman said, smiling.

Jamie stopped laughing when she saw his face. “But you’re drunk.”

“I thought you were cute before I was drunk,” Portman said with a slur.

Jamie gulped. “But you’re drunk now so let’s just disregard this,” Jamie said, glancing down. “Right?”

As if slapped by a hand, Portman sobered up immediately. He smiled and gave a nod. “Of course.”

wow...what a scene. i kind of feel sad 4 my little porty :( how can she b like that w/ him? just not fair :( newayz, keep up the fabu job :-p hope 2 read more soon :)

-erica
guessgirl
2008-10-02 . chapter 7
Fantastic job as always. Poor Parker, she's really missing Cooper, hopefully her message gets through to Cooper. I also love how protective she is over her friends and the poeple she cares about. Jamie's a great addition to the group, keeping my fingers crossed for her and Portman. Can't wait for more.
galindapopular
2008-10-02 . chapter 7
Aww, poor Portman. I do like Jamie though, keep updating. I know I've said it many times but I'm soo happy to have you back!
guessgirl
2008-09-30 . chapter 6
I'm loving this story. Really looking forward to Jamie's story, sounds like a recipe for a bit of mayhem which is always fun. I also loved the banter between the boys in the locker room. Can't wait for the next updates.

P.S. Is anyone else having problems with their notifications, mine don't seem to be coming through, maybe it's just me?
galindapopular
2008-09-30 . chapter 6
Super cute! I really do love this story...I'm having one of the craziest days of my academic career today, so to get an update this morning was quite nice!
guessgirl
2008-09-18 . chapter 5
Great update, I'm liking Jamie a lot and I love her little insights into the gang and the different relationships, very funny. Poor Guy and Parker trying to find time together. Their scene at the rink was really sweet, lol at the woman overhearing their conversation. I'm thinking Cooper needs to be really careful. Anyway can't wait to read more and see what happens next.
awtr101fan
2008-09-18 . chapter 5
not a bad chapter. i like the interaction between portman & jamie. i'm a little confused though. ever since she showed up in the story, i thought she was his gurlfriend. now it seems that she's just a friend from 1 of his classes. i thought there mite've been a connection w/ the way they r around each other. maybe it's just me. that creppy guy @ the end w/ cooper rubs me the wrong way. he was only in the chapter 4 like 2 seconds & he already scares me. don't know y. keep it up :)

-erica
galindapopular
2008-09-18 . chapter 5
I don't like this Sam person...I do however like Jamie. Good for Portman, finding a girl all on his own. I know I said it before but it's just soo good to have you back!
guessgirl
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
So thrilled to see you back, I love this series. Hopefully Cooper and Max work can things through I really like them as a couple. Parker and Guy are super cute as always and it looks like Portman might of found a girl. Can't wait to read on and see what happens next.
galindapopular
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
OH you're back! You have NO idea how I missed you m'dear!
galindapopular
2007-08-05 . chapter 3
Ah! Poor kids, loved the friends stuff.

The cranberry juice now always makes me think of The Departed. LOL. Keep it up babe!
PolkadotSunstar
2007-08-04 . chapter 3
I certainly wasn't expecting that, it's a nice twist though. Nice chapter, I liked the comparison's they made. Great chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
-Sunstar =D
Torithy
2007-07-22 . chapter 2
Fulton's a ho, lol! I'd let him in on the girl talk too though! :D
galindapopular
2007-07-21 . chapter 2
Seriously? Cooper and Max have to stay together, don't do that to me!

Good work, agh, I love Parker, so much...freakin A Jess needs to be back. Poor Guy, not gettin any...
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