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| kaitou angel 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abusePwhoar...I wonder how Suzaku will play into all of this? it was great! Please continue it! |
| Hinata-cutie 2008-07-19 ch 4, | abuseYou have an amazing talent! This, could truly be a flash back in a special episode. Are you sure you're not the creator of code geass? hope you update, and sorry about your personal problems. T.T *hugs and gives cookie* |
| animedynasty 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseWow, this is certainly an interesting idea. It makes a lot of sense, though, considering how close Euphy and Lelouch were when they were young. PLEASE DON'T PUT SUZAKU IN THIS FIC! Really, I think that there's tension enough, with the way Lelouch is acting and the whole idea of marrying your half-sister. But, as it is, it's your story...I just think it'd be a lot better with no Suzaku. Update soon! =) |
| Feysera 2008-06-27 ch 4, | abuseAnother fabulous chapter, hun! Nicely done, as always ;D I love how Lelouch is expressing his feelings towards Euphie; childlike yet obvious that he's so in love. I especially like how Lelouch throws a fit when it comes to Schneizel with Euphie; jealous Lulu is iresistable! It all feels so real, like such a thing is actually possible. That's one of the best parts of the way you write; you write so well and so faithfully to the characters that I can actually belive that Lulu loves Euphie (something he doesn't really express in the anime, sadly.) "The only time the rest of us see your true heart, Lelouch… Is when you're with Euphemia." -- Best quote of the chapter! ^^b About the next chapter: HOMG LULU WANTS TO MAKE EUPHIE HIS BRIDE! O: I'm terribly eager to see what'll happen next regarding this. And I'm sorry you're having problems in your personal life. Hope things will change for the better. (: *hugs* That's the longest review I've ever written for your fic XD Also can't wait for the lemon! ;D |
| FueledbyRamen 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abusethis is great, go lulu down with suzaku :D |
| ImAgInAtIvE gIrL nIkKeRz 2008-06-25 ch 4, | abuseoh i love this story! update soon! |
| lovescent 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abusesorry for the messed up review, hates me :( anyway Cornelia , I guess we'll be seeing more of her now that the next chapters deals with the CG episodes, and Suzaku too can't wait! espicially after reading the preview for the next chapter! thank you so much for not abandoning this fic, and again sorry for the long review ;) |
| lovescent 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI actually gasped when I saw that you updated ;) I really love this chapter, I think it's my favourite so far. I love anything that has to do with the Imperial Siplings and thier interaction...(Euphie saying she would miss Clovis is so in charcter, even though he called her Stuphemia :p ) and the fact that its told from Marianne's POV (in flashback!! she knows he killed her :( thats heartbreaking!!) is such the icing on the delicious cake. your Schneizel is just amazing, I love that you gave him a bigger role in this chapter as Lelouch's rival not only in Chess ;), and the way he was doting on Euphemia was so cute! loved Charles not batting an eye about his son and daughter being in love, and Marianne's reaction to it is perfect. as for Lelouch x Euphie , you made it seem so real that I can actually see it as canon, i love how overprotective Lelouch is.. i hope to see more of your Clovis (the fact that he does NOT hate Lelouch makes me really sad that Lelouch killed him, he was probably sincere when he said he was happy to see him) and Cornelia |
| SakuraTeardrop 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseOMG. That's the cutest thing ever ^^. Good job in this chapter once again and update when you feel like it ^^ Your story is so awesome. |
| nequam-tenshi 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abusewonderful job on the new chapter! i just love the EuphieXLulu pairing! |
| Misteline 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseI loved this chapter. You had us waiting so long for an update. I love how you go in depth on Euphie and Lelouch's characters. Not to mention Schneizel! Lelouch does seem a lot more forward about his feelings for Euphie, but I suppose that's due to the fact that he's still young. All in all, though, this is turning out to be a really great fic. I can't wait for another one of your updates. |
| Cal reflector 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseI wish I alone could give you the amount of motivation you need to see this story through, for I would hate to see such good writing go stillborn from lack of encouragement. The Royal Siblings, particularly Euphie and Lelouch, are splendidly portrayed in your hands. It does not feel like an AU and I don't consider it one seeing how you're working within the loose confines of canon (which is overrated anyhow). Again, the lovely details and gestures from the characters really form scenes in the reader's mind quite nicely. The conversation between Charles and Maraianne was very interesting--as whether incest was a big deal in Britannian Royalty was a big deal or not was never settled. Euphemia and Lelouch--in the manner which you have portrayed them--are simply adorable. I feel I'm becoming a convert. |
| Cal reflector 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abuseYour writing is a joy to read; the details and dialogue are wonderful. The immaturity with which you portrayed the siblings as children is a difficult task but I think you've pulled it off great. |
| lovescent 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abuseyou have no idea how much i love your fic.. I reread it every few weeks or so, and every time I do, I just love it more. LuluXEuphie is my fav. pairing in CG, its a shame there's not enough fics out there. Great job, and plz plz plz update ? ;D |
| Michikame 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseThis is quite an interesting story; I'm really interested in all Lelouch x any female pairings! This is well written and I'm definitely anxious to find out how this continues. ^^ |