Would comment, but have melted into a puddle on the floor :P

Man this is good. Heartbreaking and beautiful and phrased like magic. It makes just enough non-sense to make more sense than coherence could. I love it. Brilliant fic. Their dialogue is incredibly good. Whole thing's wonderful. K, I'll stop throwing adjectives at you now ;)

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yey, kawaii ^^ love it *_*

You really captured these two so well. I really have nothing else to say. D: Beautiful~

It's such a shame that Yoji and Natsuo aren't more popular characters, because then beautiful fics like this one get overlooked.

Incredible. The soft, drowzy, and mildly mournful tone perfectly captures the two's state after loosing thier psychotic edge from when they were a functional team. I've always loved the intimate nest scenes Yoji and Natsuo had after they had nothing to do after being abandoned by Nagisa, and I think you expanded on them wonderfully. The dynamics of a Sacrifice and a Fighter are commonly discussed in Loveless fics, but you hit a true note of poignancy here.