it's good

good story

You should make a sequel

Ok, ok...

Amm, first to anything, if you read something wrong here, its because my english is bad (XD)... and dont ask me why Im here, but, the title was very interesting for me, and I couldnt resist. (XP)

So... it was the first history in english what I read, and it was fantastic! seriously, I had to read with my dictionary in my hand (XD), and the more curiosly was what the part more complicated for me was the kiss (XD), but Im happy! (amm, how I say "valio la pena" XD?) oh yes! it cost the risk (xP)

I´ll hope you can read this easily, I dont really sure if I wrote right. Anyway, your history is so great!! XD

Ciao.

good

Cute!

this is cute

I'm not usually a fan of this paring but I must say, that was well written :D it's a definate "aww" lol good job.

this reminds me so much of how my boyfriend and i used to be.. when boring days weren't so bad..

I actually think that it would have been really funny if their rings got stuck on their fingers. I mean, they're in a gloomy house with dark magical things in it, and something is BOUND to happen, right? lol. anyway, great one-shot. I didn't find any errors, except that Charles is never called that, but Charlie. Anyway, great job! I really enjoyed this.

Nice, i really like Harry Potter so i enjoyed this story.