Reviews for Traps and Butterfly

HalfMoon-Smile 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseDone with a beautiful narration^^ (alih bahasa ke Indo) Filosofisnya tajam, bu^^. Saya takut salah nangkep, tapi ini tentang ego 'menguasai'? Pliz PM me, or maybe some chat to discuss it...hehehe.
Quill and Saber 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI give you props for the original matter. I liked your general flow of storytelling; you seem to have a knack for it. As for the bad grammar, I suggest you try to find a beta reader who can fix these problems for you and let you know what the problems are. If you learn a language wrong, you'll use the language wrong. You don't want to accidentally learn bad habits. I'm not trying to patronize you; I just had a very bad experience with Spanish verbs, and I know firsthand it's very hard to relearn something.
linxin-pei 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseThat...that was beautiful! It was quite well done for someone, even if english language isn't your frst language. Kinda reminds me of my lousy chinese compositions... You are from the US right? Pardon me if I'm wrong. What was your mother toungue?
Katya 2007-06-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was very creative, and it was beautifully written. The dialogue and narration remind me of V from V for Vendetta. Great work!