I think it's great that Krillin is shown in a good way! :) He was a bad kid but he turned into a good one after being around Goku for a while, I think. Same as Bulma; I think if she gave Kinto'un a try maybe towards the end of Dragonball, she might've been able to stay on.

...something I just CANNOT fathom is how Chi-Chi of all people was able to ride Kinto'un. Then again, maybe she turned horrible once she matured ^^;

Anyway, good story! :)

Nice idea. Kuririn doesn't sound like a boy, though.

So cute...

I loved it...

You know, Krillin wields the Genki Dama against Vegeta in Dragonball Z, and it has the same requirements as Kintou'un, maybe even stricter. I do like this story a lot. you catch Krillin as just the right mix of angsty, brash, and sappy all at once. That is a really hard thing to do.

Nice job. Why couldn't Kuririn ride it in the first place, anyway? Probably because of his bribery and reading **. great story!

Great job! That was really sweet.

I like it! Very cute.