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| Secret Thought 2008-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing story, I really wish there was more to it. :] |
| Touch of the Wind 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseCUTE! |
| Hoshi Tamamushiirono 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the Wy/Kis interaction here- I hope you do more with this! |
| dreamgirl93 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseso adorable, especially near the end where its Chris and Wyatt. |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseAww Yay ok i loved this one too lol Yay |
| Dark Destiny 1329 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa This was sweet. You did say it was pretty fluffy, and I have to agree; but that's all right. I wasn't really in the mood for drama or tragedy at the moment. Chris is such an intricate character, and you dealt with him nicely. The personality you created for him (in my humble opinion, LoL) was dead on. Sweet and gentle underneath all that sarcasm and neurotic behavior. Kudos. Wonderfully written. Could you please write a sequel. Please? I'd read it - I'd be the first to read it, LoL! Zaijen -Shan- |
| MidnightLightning36 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. I love the idea of Chris checking in on Wyatt, that was cute. |
| dgeo98 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. You should make it longer and make it so they find out who Chris is or at least Leo. |
| sn0zb0z 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It would be good if you wrote more. I like how you showed what Leo was thinking and the part between Chris and Wyatt at the end. Well done! |
| terra fea 2007-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was good. I hope you continue it. This would make a really good reveal fic :) |
| JayneyHunter 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice and short. I love the interaction better chris and wyatt as well as the on-looking Leo. Very nice job! |
| Witty-Kate 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseaw that is so cute! you've got to right more... like a sequal or something! going stright on my favs! |
| History Buff 1990 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was so sweet, I loved it. Although there were a few minor spelling and grammatical errors, but they were by far outweighed by the coolness of this story. Please write more, maybe next you could post something including Bianca being alive next, maybe like a one sgot about them or something. I would love to see how you would show her in your writing :) Take care. |
| aerohead1980 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was fantastic. I loved it. |
| scme 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abusevery very sweet! loved it! nice to see a fic where everyone is worried bout chris before they know who he is. and the wyatt/ chris stuff was so cute! |