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| Castle Anthrax 2007-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery interesting. It's been a long time since I've checked the Advent Rising archives. I figured no one was overly interested in it, but it has one of the best story lines for a video game ever. Anyway, I like your writing style. It's descriptive without going overboard. I really hope you continue this story, especially since no one has finished one in this section. Great job so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| zombiewolf 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseHm not bad, i wouldn't mind reading more. Your Lord and Master ~Zombie Wolf |
| Draic Kin 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. There are so few decent AR stories out there, and, if you keep this up, it may become one of the better ones. Minor criticism: It seems your attempting to make the Koroem/Olivia/Ethan non specific. I would recommend you change that, but it's your story. You decide. |