|Reviews for Advent Lying|
| Pryde Kitty 5/19/10 . chapter 3
This is a most curious sort of side story. I'm definitely interesting in seeing where this story goes! Also more Mato using his sharp wit is always a good thing! 3
| Castle Anthrax 7/6/07 . chapter 1
Very interesting. It's been a long time since I've checked the Advent Rising archives. I figured no one was overly interested in it, but it has one of the best story lines for a video game ever. Anyway, I like your writing style. It's descriptive without going overboard. I really hope you continue this story, especially since no one has finished one in this section. Great job so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| zombiewolf 6/26/07 . chapter 1
Hm not bad, i wouldn't mind reading more.
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| Draic Kin 6/17/07 . chapter 1
Very nice. There are so few decent AR stories out there, and, if you keep this up, it may become one of the better ones. Minor criticism: It seems your attempting to make the Koroem/Olivia/Ethan non specific. I would recommend you change that, but it's your story. You decide.