This is a most curious sort of side story. I'm definitely interesting in seeing where this story goes! Also more Mato using his sharp wit is always a good thing! 3

Very interesting. It's been a long time since I've checked the Advent Rising archives. I figured no one was overly interested in it, but it has one of the best story lines for a video game ever. Anyway, I like your writing style. It's descriptive without going overboard. I really hope you continue this story, especially since no one has finished one in this section. Great job so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Hm not bad, i wouldn't mind reading more.

Your Lord and Master

Zombie Wolf

Very nice. There are so few decent AR stories out there, and, if you keep this up, it may become one of the better ones. Minor criticism: It seems your attempting to make the Koroem/Olivia/Ethan non specific. I would recommend you change that, but it's your story. You decide.