Kinda sad none of his stories have been updated in years, its quite a big frustration to see such a unique take that's also gritty without being too black.

Gods I miss this fic. I must have read it over a dozen times. Really wish it was updated

I don't know if you've noticed, but occasionally there are random check marks in your story. I don't know how else to describe it, but if you go through and read it, you'll see what I mean. Good job on the story other than that!

dialog: 100% awesome (and then some)

background/unknown character info: 100% interesting and perfectly done

OC's: unbelievably well done

One of the best fic's on this site,

sincerely,

Excellent story I suppose. I look forward to another update... that probably won't happen.

Nice job!

Another unfinished glory. Such a shame. really needs more like this, people who actually go into detail to flesh out the universe, it makes for such interesting reading.

very nice

Interesting though slow moving

A good story

Nice fic i enjoy reading Anbu ones but haven't found many can't wait for you to update again, even though it looks like its been a while since u last updates. Keep up the good work anf i hope you update soon.

Peace Out

Sandaime Hokage

Good story! I hope you didnt abandone it.

I officially like all of the Naruto fics that you've posted. I don't really have much to say, so I'll just say that I hope you post something soon. Good luck in all of your endeavors.

Really enjoyed the story so far. Hoping it will continue. One suggestion though, put a page break in or something, it will make things easier to follow in the long run. Especially since you write some long chapters.

So far so good, only problem I have with this story is your layout.

You tend to change perspective without warning, it makes the story hard to follow without rereading some sections a few extra times.

But other then that, its earned a spot on my favorites list and you've earned a spot on my watched authors list XD

Rev