|Reviews for Operator|
| anthropomorphizer 1/15/09 . chapter 10
Nice chapter! Keep up the great work.
| Bloodreaver Alpha 1/15/09 . chapter 10
'Bout bloody time! Look forward to seeing more of this!
| Darkciel 1/15/09 . chapter 1
so far, i've read all of your fanfictions starting from "Karma" to "Reload" and i can't help but return to your Author's page every half a day, reading the quality of the details of other fanfiction, yours is unique! leaving such suspense and mystery throughout your tales, holding on to the background information of your characters like and S-ranked secret! it's infuriatingly addicting! giving the readers the faintest whisper of knowledge and watching them squirm in confusion and anticipation! i really home that you will update ANY of your stories soon... whichever you update it will always be awesome!
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 9
Ino completely freaked out. That was the most Awesome Tirade Ever!
Will you be posting more of this delightful story?
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 7
What in the world could they possibly want with Ino?
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 6
If Naruto was that adverse to guarding Sasuke, he could have allowed them to fail their genin exam. It's not like they'll do well with Kakashi as a sensei.
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 5
Okay I'm going to try and piece something together and maybe you'll let me know if I'm on the right track?
So, Kakashi was the Jounin instructor for Naruto's genin team which included Hayate's little brother.
I am assuming Hayate died on a mission.
Naruto obviously blames Kakashi for not teaching his students and possibly for Hayate's brother's death.
But you mentioned a trial ealier. Did Kakashi try to lay the blame at Naruto's feet? Or did Naruto get into a fight with Kakashi? Maybe Naruto lost control after his team mate was killed?
I'm trying to connect this with Naruto's comment to the Sandaime about him being a "third rate overemotional shinobi". I'm hoping/guessing that it was Kakashi who originally said that and not the Sandaime.
But what I don't get is how Iruka is involved.
There's a lot of anger there for Iruka not to have been involved somehow.
This is really intriguing.
I loved the masterful passive aggressive slap in the face Naruto gave Kakashi by placing Gekkou's sword on the table.
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 4
The weapons summon idea is nifty
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 2
I love the realistic feel you gave this chapter. It was a great idea to show us a "day in the life of squad 4" through the eyes of a newbie!
We're not normal. We don't do normal either.
| Kaka Fan 12/31/08 . chapter 1
This is so good. Your wit is sharp and amusing to read. :D
| pheonix1023 12/22/08 . chapter 9
Please update. The story is really good, but you stopped right in the middle. I know you have other stories, but please continue this one soon.
| maikoruhotmail.com 12/18/08 . chapter 9
Case. You are a fanfic GOD! Originality in fanfic, the irony! and you pull it off with consistent characterization, well written prose, and excellent grammar!
You make it flow so well it looks easy. It makes me want to write my own goofball ideas. I start, and within a few sentences I realize my humble skills are often not up to the task.
Keep on writing, I've liked all your stories I've seen so far.
| DarkRavie 12/16/08 . chapter 9
I like your fic and can't wait to read ytour next chapter.
| Hitsumaru 12/6/08 . chapter 9
If you are having writer's block I can understand, and if you want to focus on reload, please go ahead. But also will you plese update this story? THe world of has been degenerated into a world of yaoi, smut, and poorly written plotlines, details and stories altogether. Help save the people who need a good story because it takes to long to walk to the library, and then you have to return the book anyway.(p.s does anyone know when kunaishot is going to get his acount fixed cause it's been that way for months)
| Vulc10900 11/17/08 . chapter 9
Dude, I'm kind of hating you right now for this cliffy and not updating for like 7 months... Hmm i wonder if Saya joins the HanaNaruHaku triangle cuz that would make it more interesting