Reviews for Eevee's Chance

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twilight prince32 2008-07-11 ch 7,	abuseooh, nice job, keep it up! why didn't the meany-headed council RAISE THE ROOF! i mean, that jut seems cruel, whacking his head on a marble ceiling. i am eager for an update!
Yin7 2008-04-18 ch 7,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story. can't wait for what happens next.
Matkin22 2008-02-13 ch 7,	abuseHmm, a couple of interesting twists in these last couple of chapters. I still think that the plot is progressing really quickly, but it's still a very enjoyable read. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Matkin22 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuseAnother good chapter. Considering that Eevee only has four days, she's definitely moving fast. I wouldn't be surprised if Tyler realized who she was as he lay in bed that night. There were definitely more than enough hints in this one short chappie: the locket, the Ekans conversation, and the sense of familiarity. Tyler seems to be moving fast though, already putting his arm around her and kissing her cheek. My only complaint about this chapter is that it was too short. You had a lot of plot worked into this, but it happened much too quickly. Focus on detailing the background and slowling the pace a little. You don't want to rush the story! Keep up the good work.
Matkin22 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseA neat little introductory chapter here. Since you have 47 reviews already, I'm going to guess that others have already mentioned that Espeon isn't spelt with an i, :P An Eevee loving a human... I didn't see that one coming when I saw this on another user's favourite list. You seem to have a natural talent for writing. This prologue was short, but it really grasps the reader. I can't wait to read more! Consider yourself (and this story) favourited.
StormFang 2007-12-26 ch 7,	abuseSorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Anyways, I like what you did! The typical story would have made the council all legendary Pokemon. I'm glad your actually creative! Keep up the good work!
Felix the Eeveetrainer 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseI love this story, it is great! Is Eevee going to be permanantly human if she wins! Wouldn't she end up missing her previous existence? Espeons rule.
Chiquita Loca 2007-12-25 ch 7,	abuseI like it alot. Its very cute! Keep up the good work.
Hailfire753 2007-12-22 ch 7, anon.	abuseYay! you finally updated! I love this story, please keep going.
xXxDarkAngel2894xXx 2007-12-14 ch 7,	abuseAw Evee is so lucky.
Abysswing 2007-12-12 ch 7,	abuseVery interesting. Terribly slow writing... argh. Write faster! I liked the council and how they work. I'm expecting something epic on the mount. Like; he fails the test but wins anyway due to his heart, or something. Heh.
Sir Edward 2007-12-10 ch 7,	abuseOh, a cliffy!! O_O Another great chapter! Fine work. Keep it up! Sir Edward
Foxyjosh 2007-12-09 ch 7,	abuseI forgot Tyler is a human. It's hard to keep track of all the good stories that I am reading. Including this one.
Mintobrandybuck 2007-12-09 ch 7,	abuseHuzzah! Wonderful chapter! Keep the goodness, coming, please!
Tsaukpaetra 2007-12-09 ch 7,	abuse{in an ominous voice:} And so begin, The Trials :) Cheers!

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