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| Doec 2007-07-11 ch 3,  | abuseSo is this the end, or will there be more? |
| Obie11 2007-07-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love this story, but I'm kind of mad that it's over! I think you should 'un' complete it and wrap some of it's mysteries (like how did janeway mask her identity. Some flashbacks on the mutiny. How did Harry manage to escape) It would also be nice to see how they work to fit back in, after being so brutally emotionally and physically mistreated. anyway, loved it! Keep it coming. |
| RingWarriorAzec 1708 2007-07-11 ch 3, | abuseIs there a prequel? I'd really like to see one. This is great. |
| Gabriella Janeway 2007-07-11 ch 3, | abuseI loved it. Are you going to add on? If you do I can't wait. |
| GimmeABeat 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseGreat story, but it too soon to end it. Please write more. |
| Singing Violin 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseInteresting. Will there be more? I'm still sad that Chakotay's dead, but I can accept it. One little thing: Tom probably meant to tell Kathryn that their experiences were *un*imaginable (not "imaginable"). Oh, and I think Harry would be hugged as well as the captain. |
| Shadowtheory 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseWow. I'm, enraptured! Incredibly compelling story. Your attention to detail should be applauded. PLEASE CONTINUE. Very original! And, yes, Chakotay got what was coming to him! Finally! (Worst first officer ever!) |
| obie11 2007-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseDon't feel bad about killing off Chakotay, in this type of story he'd be a useless lump of coal. As for Janeway's attitude towards Tom, I think I understand where you're going with that. I suspect that Janeway is trying to keep her identity under wraps to make sure the crew truly is sorry and really wants her back after exhiling her to live on that God forsaken planet. Also, In order to get the full story, especially from someone as crafty as Tom, she'd need to appear unattached (hence the hidden identity). So what if she knocked him up a little bit? (the kid needs a good kick in the teeth everyonce and awhile) Regardless, I think we all agree that you should continue with this story so by all means, post again soon. |
| RingWarriorAzec 1708 2007-06-15 ch 2, | abuseOk this is interesting but I'm not sure about Kathryn's attitude to Tom. It seems a bit off. Anyway this is interesting please update soon. |
| Singing Violin 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseI'm not sure I understand why Kathryn was torturing Tom and why she won't admit to him who she is (and why Tom doesn't recognize her). I also am sad that you (seem to have) killed Chakotay. Nevertheless, it is an interesting story and you have me hooked. |
| obie11 2007-06-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is an amazing story idea. I can't wait until the next installment. |
| LinZE 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseIntriguing. Really enjoying this and can't wait for more. Post again soon please thanks for sharing Linds |
| Asthore 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abusePlease continue! It's really good so far. |
| Julie-N-Maggie-fan 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseAww I love this story!! Please continue and UPDATE! |
| britjanee 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseloved it! can't wait for the next chapter! |