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Reviews For: One Last Gift

Prancing Through Traffic
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abusegushy. I love it *sing song voice*
sally
2007-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abusesweet. . . but a little sad
Briana Marie
2007-06-18
ch 1,
abuseHaving "created" the Petunia/Severus ship (or at least having introduced it to my many readers with my fic) I am going to be partial to any stories that have it. And I liked this. You have a very nice style, but I have one complaint about the story. There is absolutely no explanation as to why Severus is going to pick up Harry in the first place. If this is supposed to be HBP compliant then Harry is under the impression that Snape is the bad guy, having killed Dumbledore and all. I am still up in the air on whether or not I buy that he's actually a bad guy, but there is no ambiguity on how Harry feels. So if this isn't supposed to be HBP compliant, there should be some disclaimer or something. Just a thought.
murmuring'.breeze-
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseIt was written in a really interesting manner. Nice job in portraying each character. "Petty" was a little OOC but overall great interpretation of the characters.
lupinsstar
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abusePetunia and Snape? Interesting...

fabulous as ever though, nice to see what fun you've obviously had while I revised physics!!

Kel x
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