Reviews for Thirty for three

Reviews For: Thirty for three

Raven's Gate 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuse...Wow. That was just...wow. I just love the idea! It's so much more interesting and deep than the normal love triangle you usually find for these three. But now, I can't decide which I like more. In the anime, I hate Ran. In the manga, I sorta like her. But I think I like her a lot more now from reading this. I always loved Shiho/Haibara from the beginning of both manga and anime. She was always so mysterious and dark...quite the character for the series. And I have no doubt that she wouldn't ever stop loving Shinichi, or Conan when she was Ai, even if he loved Ran as well. ...Damn I'm a hypocrite. xD The way you wrote out their problems was fatastic as well. Neither girl could decide if she could trust him, but neither could exactly deny that they loved him. And though it may be akward, they could still give sharing him a shot. After all, sharing is caring. XDXDXD -shot-
Watashi1 2008-01-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMFG SO GOOD!
teainapot 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseThis story is beautiful, Claude, and pleasantly different in so many ways it’s hard to explain. It is much more a character study than a plot driven tale, and it works well with your writing style. I love how intimate it feels to the reader. The dialogues are not just dialogues; they covered past and present experiences, outwardly spoken feelings and subtle insinuations. This is not the kind of light fics for work-break read, I guess XD, but for people who really care about the characters and are willing to be carried into unexpected territories; this is one persuasive essay of what could be. Please continue!
ASDF 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseNO WAY You are amazing Speechless, but my hands are still moving. I love the pairing, I love your writing style, I love this story. You should consider being a writer. You are just too damn good.
hao11 2007-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abusenice first chapter! and yes, the idea of their relationship is very interesting!! update!! woo
Kimmy-chan 2007-06-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. That was really deep. It seems to side of Shinichi/Shiho more than Shinichi/Ran. If possible could you please translate your other Shinich/Shiho fanfic for us. I just love that pairing!
Eeveebeth Fejvu 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseWow. What a beginning. When I clicked on this story, I thought it was going to be a love-triangle (I'm obviously used to my normal two-person het), but the polygamy idea is actually far more interesting. I always have trouble writing ConanAi without mentioning the "Ran factor" in some way or other, so the way Shinichi deals with his love for both of them in this... just cool writing. The dialogue in the middle was a bit heavy, but it was still good nevertheless. I tell you truthfully, I can't wait until you get into how this threesome is going to make it work, and the way Ran and Shiho end up relating to one another. Keep writing for sure! ~Eevee
SN 1987A 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI've been very bad at reviewing stories I read lately. Please forgive? :) My favorite parts are Ran's personal reflections on the situation. While I like the content in the dialogue conversation between Shinichi and Shiho, the pure talking got a bit dull after a while. Which is probably a reason why I like Ran's reflections so much because it provided a nice break from the conversation. I particularly like the repeated usage of "Since when...?" :) And I like how Shinichi tries to show that he can love both girls without loving either less. I did feel a bit disappointed to see Shiho relatively unaccepting of the situation, though. But maybe that was the point. I have mixed feelings about Shiho calling Shinichi to tell him that she was leaving. Part of me thinks that she would leave without a word, and part of me thinks she would try to provide an explanation. It's a common theme to explore, and while I thought the introduction to it was a bit sudden and jerky (as if did so just to set up what came after), what came after was well done.
funvince 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuseAn interesting idea and coming from the Ranma fandom, I'm used to these type of stories. My favorite pairing is Shinichi/Ran but I also like Conan/Ai, so I'm willing to see where you go with this trying to have the best of both worlds. What will make things interesting is not so much Shinichi's relationships with the girls but how the girls deal with each other.
FirstSilvera 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuseGood story with a believable beginning for a threesome. The idea is interesting, although I greatly doubt that such a relationship can last because, at some point, one chooses one person, and jealousy should not be undersestimated. But then monogamous relationships usually don't last either. And why shouldn't there be an exception to the rule? XD Besides, Claude... The way you write the dedication to Dag and Socchan ("These thirty stories are dedicated to both Dagron and Socchan, they know why.") lets me question your relationships to those two girls... XD *just kidding.
Rally 2007-06-14 ch 1,	abuseDidn't you know that you shouldn't make a girl cry? ;M; This is way too good, and English isn't even your mother tongue, right? I'm envious... The same way as Shinichi, I can't decide which one I like the most: Ran or Haibara. So this kind of stories make me both sad and happy. Poor them... (I personally think he would choose Ran, but as you said, he would regret it forever). Well, I'll stop babbling nonsense! Very good story, congrats!! ^0^

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