I like how Ria just stepped in and unconciously brought light to the situation with just a few sentences. I sware, the Ronin leaders know their fellows so well, it's amazing. XD I sympathize with Keisha's hair problem. Poor girl, but that's what she has Kento for. ^_~ ...Now I want want a Kento. :( Lucky girl.

LOL! Awesome story! I loved it!

As one who tried to wear my hair in a form of a Afro in the 70's, I know what Keisha was going through. A very funny story Dixxy, and I hope that this will help inspire you to keep working on your other stories, including your Ronin material.